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Could anyone help me check if the article is grammatically correct? Many thanks.
“Process Quality Competition” had finished smoothly on Sep 12. Through the competition, not only to recognize the excellent projects in our company, but to choose the best of the best to join the higher level project competition.
There were in total 11 projects attended this year. At first, the project leader made a introduction of his project and showed the improvements through the PPT, then the judges submitted the questions, after he or she get the answer from the project leader, he or she provided each score of the 7 standards. Finally, according to the scores of the judges and the process quality status of the project, the project got its ranking.
All the projects were highly appreciated by the judges and at last the 4 projects won: VST Project, Quality Project, Quality Improvement Project, and Capacity Project.
The competition was good for all the participants. For the project leaders, they learned from each other; for the most judges, they found ways to their issues. In the end, all the participants raised questions and exchanged ideas. That’s must be good for our company.
All the judges and projects list as follows:
Above is the article written to contribute to newspaper of our company. I feel the words are too simple and isn't like business English. Could you help me? Thanks.
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