Please correct my English sentences for me.

Recently, a new Japanese restaurant is （either write "was opened" to make it passive tense, in the past, or just leave it as "opened" by itself. Is is present tense, and doesn't work here) opened in my neighborhood.
But, of course the restaurant is run by a Chinese owner.
It's rare to find a restaurant that is run by Japanese in my neighborhood. ( The "is" has to be here, because using "by" means you are making it a passive sentence). 
All Japanese foods were 'Chinesenized' and staff were wearing what looked like kimonos made of cheap material. They almost seemed like erotic underwear to me. 　 like cheep ("cheep" is the sound the birds make. "cheap" is 安い）material fake Kimono, almost erotic under wear to me.
A lot of people here think that is Japanese style and that they are Japanese...
Even tho, there were a job advertisement in front of the restaurant, with Chinese writing.

Anyway, I want to try the restaurant next time. They are right next to a big supermarket that has big car park.
I don't like to park in the street, so the big car park is my big priority. Also this restaurant is BYO so I can bring my favorite wine.

Note: In America, we have that issue too. Many non-Asians wouldn't be able to tell Chinese apart from Japanese. It can be quite surprising for visitors. Overall, great notebook entry! I hope you like the food.  



Thank you for reading.

IELTS TASK 1: Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

These charts compare the purposes of using water in six areas of the world, measured in proportion.

It is clear that the largest proportion of water was used on agriculture in Asia, Africa and South America, the largest proportion of water was used in agriculture while that of  in North America and Europe more water was used for industrial usepurposes. (use here is fine, but I added in another "used" in the previous edit, so changing it to "purposes" allows you to not repeat yourself). 

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that agricultural water consumption accounts for more than 80% of total water usage in Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia. followed by South America's agriculture which accounts slightly less water usage, for 71% of total water usage. (The problem in the previous sentence is that you use the phrase "followed by" but the subject of your sentence didn't establish that there was some kind of order you were talking about). Water used for agriculture is the second largest source of water consumption in Europe and North America, takes  taking up 32% and 39% respectively.

By contrast, industrial use takes up the majority of water used in Europe and North America, at 53% and 48%, while the proportion of industrial use in the rest of the world takes up less than 10%. The proportion of domestic use in America and Europe accounts for above 10%, exhibiting higher proportion than African and or Asian areas.

Note: Generally, this was a great review! Good job.