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4.In some countries, Young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. Why does it happen and how to deal with this problem?
These days,the living standard of young people has been improved in a fast speed,but young people feel less happy than before.I thinks there are many reasons for this phenomenon,.Meanwhile young people can tackle this problems in different ways.
First,some young people today live under pressure and this cause them lacking leisure time to relax.In addition,many young people do not have enough time to communicate with their family members,so they may bear the pressures by themselves.Because of the fast pace of life and the climbing cost of living,many young people find it difficult to cope with stress today.They are not satisfied their living standards and likely to release negative emotions in life.For instance,some young people are easy to lose temper or even acting violently.
Second,some young people purchase the luxury goods such as prestigious cars,fashion accessories,which lead them to indulge in comparing with others because it can make them feel inferior to others and these people see luxuries as a status symbol.As a result,they are unhappy,if their earnings are not able to satisfy their desire for material possessions.
In order to tackle these problems,I think young people should adjust the attitude towards the life and work.They should realize what matter in life,such as friendship,healthy,communication of family members.For example,they could go to cinema with their friends or eat a meal with their parents.Meanwhile they also need adjust the attitude towards material,there are many valuable things they can do.For example,they can be a volunteer in community and helping some disabled person or elderly person.Through this ,they may acquire more sense of achievements and have meaningful experiences.