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WHO can help me to correct my IELTS compostion?I will have test on 12th Feb.Thanks a lot!!!!!!!Help 2.Some visitors are interested in other countries' cultures and traditions. How they learn other cultures and traditions? Why is it interesting to some visitors but not to others? These days,it is easier and more affordable for people to travel in other countries.There are several ways for travelers to acquire foreign countries’s cultures and customs and it has many reasons for those tourists who are interested in visit other countries. Most of the time, traveling actually brings the visitors to a mutual understanding with the natives. Being able to communicate and interact with people from other cultures enables people to gain a direct idea about how things are done in other parts of the world; as a result, it is easier to gain a brand new perspective of the world. People will thus learn to be more tolerant towards foreign values.For example,if people who can live with a Japanese family for few days,they may get to know how Japanese to classify their household waste. It is true that tourists from other countries are unfamiliar with domestic cultures or customs,so they are willing to know more about these than local people.Another reason is that people would like to release some working or studying pressures so they choose to go aboard and take a vacation to reduce these pressures.It is especially for those white-collar people who occupied with loads of assignments from their boss.They prefer to change a new environment to relax and have full enthusiasm for international travellings. In conclusion.there are various ways for tourists to familiar other countries customs and cultures,and there also the number of reasons to explain why these visitors have passions to go aboard.

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thank you a lot lady for your essy . i got a lot of things and vocabulaires from your artical , in geniral you have respected the texte structure ( introduction , body , conclusion) but i don't know if it's formal or not to mention questions belong the introduction by the way that me too On the verge of passing IELTS exam to nexte months . so i also need somebody to helpe me and guide me in order to get heght scor in ielts exam thank you again and hope you a good luck for your exam

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