ielts compositin thanks for your help 4.More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology,Do you think it is positive or negative development? Telecommuting and distance learning are welcoming for most people in recent years,because of the development of high technology,more and more people would choose to stay at home for learning or working.I do think it has benefits to do this but meanwhile,it also bring some disadvantages about this behaviors. On the one hand,telecommuting or learning distance allow people to save on commute time and transportation expenses.There is also little need for some unnecessary issues.For example,employees do not need to buy suits and dress up every workday because they can work in their jogging outfit.More importantly,rental payments and overhead costs are cut significantly,allowing employers to invest all their capital and profits back into the business. On the other hand,working from home also has some negative effects.For example,since there is no pressure to start work at a certain time.It’s very easy to delay the start of work.Productivity can seriously decrease under such circumstances if great self-discipline is not maintained.Another disadvantage is social isolation.People who work outside the home often interact with coworkers and customers.Nevertheless,those working from home lose these social aspects that can sometimes make work more enjoyable.For example,workers could gain lots of working experiences through talking with each other.sometimes,they would ask suggestions from their colleagues. In conclusion,it is true that telecommuting or distance learning can both save time or reduce costs of working to a certain extent.but it is still important for them to communicate with others in society.So I do think it’s disadvantages outweigh advantages.

lELST COMPOSITION~THANKS FOR YOUR HELPING~ Taking care of children is important, so both mothers and fathers should take childcare training courses.do you agree or disagree? Whether parents should both take care of children or just by one of them is a controversial issue.Although it may bring economic pressures on parents to do this activity,I still agree that parents should take both responsibility for childcare training courses. It is true that,attending training courses may occupy parents working time.Especially for those young parents who are busy with their work everyday,so just one person take care of children may reduce time and another person could put time for the work.To be more,attending training courses may bring economic pressures on these family,because the cost living will increase due to course training.So many parents would not choose to both attend courses to take care of their children. However,there are lots of benefits for parents to do these activities.Firstly,they can play their parts in children growing process and perform different tasks in raising children.For example,mothers could learn how to change nappies and breast feeding.Meanwhile fathers could study how to do out door activities with their children.Theses activities not only enable children to meet development needs.but also reduce the pressures of one person.Meanwhile,parents can use scientific ways to cultivate their children. In addition,parents could learn more and communicate with other children’s parents during the courses.For example,they can talk about the difficulties which they encountered in rising procedures,and they can also change the rising experiences with each other. In conclusion,to a certain extent,attending childcare training can reduce parents working time or bring economic pressures for family.but it has a beneficial effect on children education.So I believe it is necessary for parents to take these course together.

WHO can help me to correct my IELTS compostion?I will have test on 12th Feb.Thanks a lot!!!!!!!Help 4.In some countries, Young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. Why does it happen and how to deal with this problem？ These days,the living standard of young people has been improved in a fast speed,but young people feel less happy than before.I thinks there are many reasons for this phenomenon,.Meanwhile young people can tackle this problems in different ways. First,some young people today live under pressure and this cause them lacking leisure time to relax.In addition,many young people do not have enough time to communicate with their family members,so they may bear the pressures by themselves.Because of the fast pace of life and the climbing cost of living,many young people find it difficult to cope with stress today.They are not satisfied their living standards and likely to release negative emotions in life.For instance,some young people are easy to lose temper or even acting violently. Second,some young people purchase the luxury goods such as prestigious cars,fashion accessories,which lead them to indulge in comparing with others because it can make them feel inferior to others and these people see luxuries as a status symbol.As a result,they are unhappy,if their earnings are not able to satisfy their desire for material possessions. In order to tackle these problems,I think young people should adjust the attitude towards the life and work.They should realize what matter in life,such as friendship,healthy,communication of family members.For example,they could go to cinema with their friends or eat a meal with their parents.Meanwhile they also need adjust the attitude towards material,there are many valuable things they can do.For example,they can be a volunteer in community and helping some disabled person or elderly person.Through this ,they may acquire more sense of achievements and have meaningful experiences.

WHO can help me to correct my IELTS compostion?I will have test on 12th Feb.Thanks a lot!!!!!!!Help Whether media has a positive or negative influence on people is a controversial issue.Some people argue that some news media cover many crime news and sometimes mislead us.But I still believe media has lots of benefits for people. It is true that sometimes the crime r reported by news media can set bad examples for the audience.Many people,especially impressionable young people tend to copy what they see on television.For example,they may take drugs as the report on drug abuse of celebrities increase because they do not realize that the behavior of their idols has harmful consequences.Some people also commit cyber crime or fraud which is revealed by news,and they believe that they can escape justice.However, the coverage of some tragedies can keep us well-informed about the dangerous and problems in the neighbourhoods and offer us reliable information about how to take precautions to prevent such events happening again. In addition,media,especially news media,can present a large amount of information which enables people to embrace different ideas an to develop creativity.For example,news media may inform teachers about the advances in web-base technology,and they are likely to apply it in teaching and help students acquire more knowledge To be more, media provides people with opportunities to keep up the latest developments in different industries and to explore opportunities Those who watch news about the achievements of some entrepreneurs may choose to run a business and realize their potential as well. In conclusion,I still believe that media benefits us by broadening our horizons and achieving useful information,although it sometimes constrains bias and influence the public opinions.Media positive influences outweigh the negative impacts.

WHO can help me to correct my IELTS compostion?I will have test on 12th Feb.Thanks a lot!!!!!!!Help 2.Some visitors are interested in other countries' cultures and traditions. How they learn other cultures and traditions? Why is it interesting to some visitors but not to others? These days,it is easier and more affordable for people to travel in other countries.There are several ways for travelers to acquire foreign countries’s cultures and customs and it has many reasons for those tourists who are interested in visit other countries. Most of the time, traveling actually brings the visitors to a mutual understanding with the natives. Being able to communicate and interact with people from other cultures enables people to gain a direct idea about how things are done in other parts of the world; as a result, it is easier to gain a brand new perspective of the world. People will thus learn to be more tolerant towards foreign values.For example,if people who can live with a Japanese family for few days,they may get to know how Japanese to classify their household waste. It is true that tourists from other countries are unfamiliar with domestic cultures or customs,so they are willing to know more about these than local people.Another reason is that people would like to release some working or studying pressures so they choose to go aboard and take a vacation to reduce these pressures.It is especially for those white-collar people who occupied with loads of assignments from their boss.They prefer to change a new environment to relax and have full enthusiasm for international travellings. In conclusion.there are various ways for tourists to familiar other countries customs and cultures,and there also the number of reasons to explain why these visitors have passions to go aboard.

WHO can help me to correct my IELTS compostion?I will have test on 12th Feb.Thanks a lot!!!!!!!Help! 1.Students at school and university learn far more from their teachers than from other sources,such as parents,Internet and peers.Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Whether students at school and university can learn more knowledge from teachers more than other resources such as parents’ teaching or Internet resource is a controversial issue.I think students can get more knowledge from internet or by their parents.However,I do agree it is wise for student to study at school. On the one hand,students can acquire more professional and intellectual knowledge form their teachers.For example,well-educated teachers can use scientific teaching method to guide their students.so students can study more effectively and gain systemic knowledge.Teachers in school can also cultivate students study habit which is very important for their future studies and work. On the other hand, students learning from parents can also acquire knowledge,especially for those knowledge which can not study form books,such as cooking skills,social experience.However,many parents do not receive some professional training about education,such as teenager’s psychology.So sometimes,the parents do not know how to guide their children or how to provide systemic knowledge for their children.Even some young parents do no have higher education quality.Be sides,it is true that internet is an ocean of knowledge,but there are also some unreliable information on the internet.So students may mislead without teacher’s guidance. In conclusion,students learning from parents or on the internet can have a positive effect for their studies,but it is also have more drawbacks than studying at school and acquiring knowledge from teachers.So I do believe students should pay most of their time for studying at school instead of at home or on the internet.

IELTS text practice 1 Question:A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 spend too much time watching television or ply video games.How does the problem affect the children,their families and society?What measures can be taken to control it? Nowadays,many children are likely to spend much time on the television or play computer games.These behaviours have a negative effect on these children’s growth process. Watching TV too much time has a damaging effect on chilidren’s study.Because they can not concentrate their mind on their study.If they watch TV long hours,their study time will be occupied.As a result,they may have bad scores of their courses. Spending too much time on TV or video games may put a threat to the children’s language ability.They neglect the communication time with their parents and society activities.Some times ,they can only receive information from TV,but they have less opportunity to express their own feelings to peer friends or family.At the same time,they lack some outdoor times to know the society,so their language ability may suffer the bad influence. As parents , they can control their children screen time and cultivate children’s interests,such as drawing,singing or cooking skills.For example,the parents can use weekend time to take their children to the park for drawing or playing games.They can also enable their child to participate the cooking time which can not only practice child’s language ability but also encourage their creative ability.