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IELTS text practice 1 Question:A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 spend too much time watching television or ply video games.How does the problem affect the children,their families and society?What measures can be taken to control it? Nowadays,many children are likely to spend much time on the television or play computer games.These behaviours have a negative effect on these children’s growth process. Watching TV too much time has a damaging effect on chilidren’s study.Because they can not concentrate their mind on their study.If they watch TV long hours,their study time will be occupied.As a result,they may have bad scores of their courses. Spending too much time on TV or video games may put a threat to the children’s language ability.They neglect the communication time with their parents and society activities.Some times ,they can only receive information from TV,but they have less opportunity to express their own feelings to peer friends or family.At the same time,they lack some outdoor times to know the society,so their language ability may suffer the bad influence. As parents , they can control their children screen time and cultivate children’s interests,such as drawing,singing or cooking skills.For example,the parents can use weekend time to take their children to the park for drawing or playing games.They can also enable their child to participate the cooking time which can not only practice child’s language ability but also encourage their creative ability.

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Question:A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 spend too much time watching television or play video games.  How does this problem affect the children, their families and society?What measures can be taken to control it?

Nowadays, many children are likely to spend much significant amounts of time on the watching television or playing computer games. These behaviours have a negative effect on these children’s childrens' growth process.

Watching TV for too long much time has a damaging effect on chilidren’s children's ability to study,  because they cannot concentrate focus their mind on their studies.  If they watch TV for long hours, it will take away their study time will be occupied.  As a result, they may have bad scores of in their courses.

Spending too much time on TV or video games may put a threat to threaten the child's language ability.  They neglect the communication time with their parents and society social activities. Sometimes, they can only receive information from TV, but they have less opportunity to express their own feelings to peers, friends, or family members. At the same time, their language abilities may suffer because they lack do not participate in some outdoor times activities, which would allow them to get to know their society., so their language ability may suffer the bad influence.

As parents, they can control their children's screen time and cultivate children’s their interests, such as drawing, singing or cooking skills.  For example, the parents can use weekend time to take their children to the park to draw for drawing or to play games playing games.They can also enable their child to participate in the cooking time which does can not only exercise practice the child’s language ability, but also encourages their creative ability.

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