I don't even know how I must to title this stupid and small story

When his girlfriend left him and she started to live with another man, he felt like his heart was broken in million pieces and the only thing he had in on his mind was the revenge.
He became to be a miserable man who hated everyone; he felt he will would never love anyone, anymore.

But suddenly, one day when he was taking a walk in the evening, he looked at a sad girl in the street, near to the park where he usually goes. This girl was an average woman but he can't couldn't take his eyes off of her.

What would happen between both them? I don't know. That's because I don't care...
Maybe the loneliness wanted to tie these two poor souls together or maybe the destiny was boring.

Sad but thoughful; nice work, Bel! Just a few minor errors but overall, a good short story.

Bank Operations

W.: Good morning.
C.: Good morning, sir. What can I do for you?
W.: I'd like to open a bank account.
C.: What type of an account, sir? Saving or checking account?
W.: I'd like to open a saving account.
C.: What will be your an initial deposit?
W.: I'd like to open it with a deposit of 1000 dollars.
C.: Fill out this application, please. Everything is allright correct. Here are is your check book.
W.: Thank you.


C.: Good evening. Can I help your?
B.: Yes. I'd like to open a checking account. Can you give me any information about this matter?
C.: If you'd like to open a checking account, you need to maintain a daily average balance with of 1000 dollars. In this case If you do this, you won't be charged for banking service.
B.: What do you mean by charged for banking service?
C.: It is the charge of for your every check, withdrawal and deposit.
B.: Can I order a check book?
C.: Yes, madam. You can order a check book after having filling out an application and a deposit ticket.


Thank you.

Very good work, Sergei! There are not many corrections to make. Everything you wrote was well presented with good sentence structure. A few minor errors: watch your verb tense (charge vs. charged).

Starlings

I am on holiday and we are living in our country house in the Vladimir region. The surrounding nature is very saturated.
In the daytime we can see a lot of birds like a swalows, falkons and hawks which soar in the sky, seagulls, starlings, etc. At night we can hear through the opening window the voices of the nighthawk and owl.
One day ago in the Yesterday morning we saw an interesting thing: how starling chicks of the starling try to flying for the first time. It was very interesting because we never see it this early. A lot of chicks which have other colors than the adults birds in the small area. My baby daughter didn't look away from this picture.

Very beautifully written! Your country house and the birds sound lovely. Only a few small corrections regarding punctuation, the use of 'the' and some minor spelling errors.

- The difference between a semi colon (;) and a comma (,). A comma is used when listing different things, such as the birds you described. A semi colon is used to connect related sentences such as "I enjoyed your journal entry; it was very poetic".

- Remember to use the word 'the' to distinguish different nouns.

- The different between 'then' and 'than'. 'Then' is used to shown chrological order of events, such as 'I wrote this sentence. Then, I wrote this one next'. 'Than' is used to compare things, such as 'Chocolate is better than vegetables'.

a piece of speech (may somebody tell me what's wrong?) :) thanks.

Along the Throughout history there have been a lot of kinds of many entertainment activities; today, I’m going to try to teach you one of them. one that This activity is very knowing well known especially because of circus shows, but not many people practice it. This speech is about how to juggle. well, This activity activity is not so difficult provided that you do that one practice frequently. I think this activity is very important for you because it can be useful for getting fun and for entertaining other people. Also, you can teach it to your family and friends.

Very good, Michael! You have very nice sentence structure and a good grasp of punctuation, like commas. Overall, there are not many errors to correct. There were a few words and phrases that can be replaced with more suitable options. 

Legal marijuana could decreases criminality in Colorado

According to marijuana sealers, criminality has decreased since the legalization of recreational marijuana use.

A report released by marijuana sealers reveals that since January, criminality in Denver has decreased, which the sealers affirm has been possible thanks to legalization.

"We think that legalization could have been helped to decrease crime in Denver", said Mike Elliot, lawyer and director of Marijuana Industry Group.

A previous report by the Security Department of Colorado, released in April, ensured that criminality in Colorado hasn't risen since January, the month when marijuana was legalizated.

In the report of sealers, elaborated with information of local and state security agencies, marks that violent crimes and crime against property in Denver have decreased 10.6% between January and April, comparing with the same period of 2013.