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I don't even know how I must to title this stupid and small story
When his girlfriend left him and she started to live with another man, he felt like his heart was broken in million pieces and the only thing he had in on his mind was the revenge.
He became to be a miserable man who hated everyone; he felt he will would never love anyone, anymore.
But suddenly, one day when he was taking a walk in the evening, he looked at a sad girl in the street, near to the park where he usually goes. This girl was an average woman but he can't couldn't take his eyes off of her.
What would happen between both them? I don't know. That's because I don't care...
Maybe the loneliness wanted to tie these two poor souls together or maybe the destiny was boring.
Sad but thoughful; nice work, Bel! Just a few minor errors but overall, a good short story.
I don't even know how I must to title this stupid and small story I Don't Have a Title For This Short Story
When his girlfriend left him and she started to live with another man, he felt as if like his heart was had broken into a million pieces, and, the only thing he had in his mind was the revenge.
He became to be a miserable man who hated everyone, he felt he would will never love anyone again. , anymore.
But suddenly, one day evening when he was out walking taking a walk,in the evening, he looked saw at a sad looking girl in the street, near to the park where he usually goes. This girl She was an average woman but, he can't couldn't take his eyes off her.
What would happen between them both?, I don't know. That's because I don't care...
Maybe the loneliness wanted to would tie these two poor souls together or maybe the destiny was bored. boring.
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