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Bank Operations W.: Good morning. C.: Good morning, sir. What can I do for you? W.: I'd like to open a bank account. C.: What type of an account, sir? Saving or checking account? W.: I'd like to open a saving account. C.: What will be your an initial deposit? W.: I'd like to open it with deposit of 1000 dollars. C.: Fill out this application, please. Everithing is allright. Here are your check book. W.: Thank you. C.: Good evening. Can I help your? B.: Yes. I'd like to open a checking account. Can you give me any information about this matter? C.: If you open a checking account, you need to maintain a daily everage balance with 1000 dollars. In this case you won't be charged for banking service. B.: What do you mean by charge for banking service? C.: It is charge of every your check or every withdrawal deposit. B.: Can I order a check book? C.: Yes, madam. You can order a check book after having filled out an application and a deposit ticket. Thank you.

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Bank Operations

 

W.: Good morning.
C.: Good morning, sir. What can I do for you?
W.: I'd like to open a bank account.
C.: What type of an account, sir? A savings or a checking account?
W.: I'd like to open a savings account.
C.: What will be your an initial deposit?
W.: I'd like to open it with a deposit of 1,000 dollars.
C.: Fill out this application, please. Everything is all right or "alright" or "correct" or "looks fine". Here is your checkbook.
W.: Thank you.


C.: Good evening. Can I help you?
B.: Yes. I'd like to open a checking account. Can you give me any information about this matter?
C.: If you'd like to open a checking account, you need to maintain a daily average balance of 1,000 dollars. If you do, you won't be charged for banking service.   a fee.
B.: What do you mean by "be charged a fee"?
C.: It is a fee for every check you write or withdrawal you make.
B.: Can I order a checkbook?
C.: Yes, madam. You can order a checkbook after having filled out or simply "after filling out". Both are correct. an application and a deposit ticket.


Thank you.

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Bank Operations

W.: Good morning.
C.: Good morning, sir. What can I do for you?
W.: I'd like to open a bank account.
C.: What type of an account, sir? Saving or checking account?
W.: I'd like to open a saving account.
C.: What will be your an initial deposit?
W.: I'd like to open it with a deposit of 1000 dollars.
C.: Fill out this application, please. Everything is allright correct. Here are is your check book.
W.: Thank you.


C.: Good evening. Can I help your?
B.: Yes. I'd like to open a checking account. Can you give me any information about this matter?
C.: If you'd like to open a checking account, you need to maintain a daily average balance with of 1000 dollars. In this case If you do this, you won't be charged for banking service.
B.: What do you mean by charged for banking service?
C.: It is the charge of for your every check, withdrawal and deposit.
B.: Can I order a check book?
C.: Yes, madam. You can order a check book after having filling out an application and a deposit ticket.


Thank you.

 

Very good work, Sergei! There are not many corrections to make. Everything you wrote was well presented with good sentence structure. A few minor errors: watch your verb tense (charge vs. charged).

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