Starlings

I am on holiday and we are living staying in our country house in the  Vladimir region. The surrounding nature is very saturated . We are surrounded by nature.
In During the daytime we can see a lot of birds like a swallows, falcons,seagulls, starlings ; falkons and hawks.The hawks which soar in the sky.; seagulls; starlings etc. At night we can hear the sound of a nighthawk and owl through opening the open window the voice of nighthawk and owl.
One day ago in the Yesterday morning we saw watched the starling chicks interesting thing how chiks of the starling try to flying for the first time. It was very interesting It was very interesting because we've never seen it before. never saw it early. A lot of Many young birds are not the same colour as the adults chicks which have other color then adolts birds at the small area. My baby daughter couldn't stop watching the birds. didn't look away from this picture.

Starlings

I am on holiday and we are living in our country house in the Vladimir region. The surrounding nature is very saturated.
In the daytime we can see a lot of birds like a swalows, falkons and hawks which soar in the sky, seagulls, starlings, etc. At night we can hear through the opening window the voices of the nighthawk and owl.
One day ago in the Yesterday morning we saw an interesting thing: how starling chicks of the starling try to flying for the first time. It was very interesting because we never see it this early. A lot of chicks which have other colors than the adults birds in the small area. My baby daughter didn't look away from this picture.

Very beautifully written! Your country house and the birds sound lovely. Only a few small corrections regarding punctuation, the use of 'the' and some minor spelling errors.

- The difference between a semi colon (;) and a comma (,). A comma is used when listing different things, such as the birds you described. A semi colon is used to connect related sentences such as "I enjoyed your journal entry; it was very poetic".

- Remember to use the word 'the' to distinguish different nouns.

- The different between 'then' and 'than'. 'Then' is used to shown chrological order of events, such as 'I wrote this sentence. Then, I wrote this one next'. 'Than' is used to compare things, such as 'Chocolate is better than vegetables'.