right or wrong?

So, it soon became clear that the wide extend of the area would not have made possible timely, interventions realized for discontinuous time steps.[I would restructure the first sentence as it doesn't make much sense. The beginning of the sentence is ok "So, it soon became clear that the wide extent of the area.."]

Indeed, all attempts involved prior to the acquisition of the land by Fino,which that had not taken into account of the above-mentioned problems, failed miserably. And they These problems had strongly compromised the continuation of the initiative itself.
The project, in fact, in all its various and different joints could only work if each part will be is made similarly to the other. strictly on the net with the other.

My last days in Ciudad Real.

I'm studying Industrial Engineering in at Ciudad Real. That This year I finish my studies. I'm studying Industrial Engineer. I'm writting working on my final project My final project is , which is about topological optimization. I've programmed created an algorithm that it optimizes the material distribution in a structure or a mechanism.

Second day

Yesterday i knew I met different people on italki. Some are nice, some are funny, while others are a little bit crazy. It's hard to me try to translate but I realize that i don´t need translating isn't what I need, I need to start thinking think in English. I have make a lot of grammar mistakes. But I can see that I'm improving. :D

about me

Hi everybody! My name is Olga. I live in Kiev, Ukrainian Ukraine. I have never been outside of Ukraine in another country, but i I'd like to take a trip to another country to see the world <em>(Звучит лучше и понятней с "country" чем с "city")</em>. have a trip to the another city to see the world.
I finished university, and now I am working as a lawyer. Recently I started learning English. So, to improve my English skills I am searching for people who want to learn Russian, and who can teaching teach me English. I'm sorry for my mistake mistakes =) please correct)))

Молодец!

I love the FIFA World Cup

Hi
I'm from Chile and am looking forward to beginning of the FIFA World Cup. My team plays with Autralia, Spain and Netherlands !!. I am sure that we will beat everyone...,well maybe not, but I am sure we will do a championship good. play well.

My country will be paralyzed with the championship during the games; there won't be a single person on the streets and everyone will be watching the game. I sure that my Latin American brothers feel the same way (Colombia, Argentina, Ecuador, Brazil and Mexico), but what about other countries?

Good job!

Практика, практика, и ещё раз практика.

Я новичок в италки (италкe - I would use "италкe" though this one is tricky), но уже чувствую как в мой мозг заходит русский язык . Спасибо всем, кто помогает мне!

Грамматика в русском языке очень странная, и я делаю много ошибок. Я ещё хочу точно переводить с английского языка на русский, и потому что у английского нет падежей (я не уверен в этом слове) и это очень трудно для меня. Но, только после двух дней на италке, я настроен оптимистически!

Keep it up. Good job. The russian is definitely hard. I can just imagine the difficulties you're experiencing. I'm learning Spanish and also spent about 2 days on the site and can't really do much w/o Google Translate.