My manager's business journey.

My manager who came bake back from Milan on yesterday. She was really excited to share tell us about her business journey and how amazing it was to see new collections and how nervous she was of attending the global meeting.

I feel her she wanna wants our store to be better than more others, so we've spent at least one hours to change the display items and make sure everything is clean. In addition, we needed to write down ten opening questions to communicate with (ask better?) customers when they walk into our store.

Finally, I think good business journeys usually inspire the people to improve themselves, Hopefully one day I will have opportunites to join.

conversation

Hello Mark how are you?
Hello Bob I'm fine thanks.
How long don't we see us since we last met?
The last time has been was a year ago.
What are you doing now?
I opened a little supermarket.
Do You opened a supermarket?
You have got courage. There are many big supermarkets in the city.
The concurrency competition will be huge , how do you do it?
I sell only biologic organic food it which comes from all over the world.
Do you have also sell Asian food ?
Certainly, Chinese and Japanese food. You come and you will see with your own eyes.
I don't know biologic organic food. It's expensive.
If you come I will make give you a discount.

Pollution

In the last twenty years the health of the world is in real dangerous danger ..We are not able to live without cars and each many families throughout the world has have more than one. Cars spread nitrogen dioxide in the air, and this is the highest worst pollutant that all countries from Us to China has have to fight.Thanks to new rules that protect our air, nitrogen dioxide is has decreased in the last few years in the USA and Europe. In Italy for example the government is trying to solve this issue by forbidden banning cars from entering in the city center. using the ‘alternate licence plates’. Unfortunately in China, India and Middle East this such pollution has grown dramatically. Nasa’s Aura satellite has been tracking global pollution trends for the past decade and it shows how our atmosphere is damaged. All the countries has have to cooperate to protect this the planet we’ve got claimed a great American politician.  (don't understand this last phrase?)

Remember to out a space after every comma and full-stop.

My special friend

Before Two days ago, I asked my friend that if (or "whether") she had any free time on today or not. I'm a little I miss her a little but we stay live in different countries that which means (that) we just use the internet to connect us. ("to communicate" is better).
The  first time When I came to the Europe alone that no without my parents, I live alone and had no friends. who live with me. Everyday I was looking for careers jobs and preparing for interviews, and a few weeks later I got job and met my friend.
We're We've been through so many things together that you will always be important in my life. Even though now you are now going back in to Asian, I still wish hope that your dream will be come true.

3.15 Got a sore throat.

About two (? you need to put a number in here) weeks ago, the new semester has just started. The season is rapidly changing in Korea. Maybe most of the foreigners don't really understand this concept. But when the season changes, the temperature changes dramatically as well. So a lot of people easily get a cold.

Although, I didn't catch a cold yet. but my tonsil is one of the weak spots in my body. When I try some anything unusual stuff or doing some hard work, this tonsil is easily gone often gives me trouble . Due to swelled my swollen tonsil, it's hard to make a voice speak. It really hurts. But I've enrolled in several talking speech classes in my collage. Thus I have to talk in order to get a good grade.

A swelled swollen tonsil means 'You're body is not a in good condition'. So I can easily get a cold in at this stage. One of the things I really hate about Korean people is, they don't cover their mouse mouth when they cough. Yeah, that's right. Koreans are so intimidate with each other, they share a cold as well! There are tons lots of the ugly Koreans coughing at me all the time. They burst spray their saliva with full of germs. It's really annoying. I hope I don't get the cold within a week.

My hometown

I come from Cangzhou, province in HEBEI province in China. It is a location located in the North of China. I grew up here and studied in the school. We live in a nice area with many shops, restaurants, and other businesses. My hometown is a small city. It's not like Beijing or Shanghai that is which are megacities, where everything is convenient, like shopping, eating, more opportunities in employment and there are many foreigners. But in my hometown live is more comfortable. Here is not prosperous, but the stress of life is not very big so great. The price of everything in my hometown is lower than the megacities. But I like to go to different places to experience life. I'm not sure that I will always stay in my hometown.When I was 18 years old, I leave left my parents to study in Moscow, and now I am in Australia. I don't know where I will work in the future, but maybe not in my hometown. When I come back to China, maybe I will work to Beijing or Shanghai or other megacities. There are more chances opportunities。

How To Give My Loved Ones An Useful Some Comfort

I realize that it's really hard to give my loved ones a little comfort if when they weren't are not in a good mood. Today, when I tried to talk with my cousin on an App called WeChat, to my surprise, I found that he had deleted me. In the beginning, I was a little angry because of it. Then I carefully thought carefully about the reason why he did so it, and I guessed that was just because of his long-time depressed mood long-term depression and high pressure (high pressure? do you mean "high blood pressure" or "stress"?), so I couldn't find a reason that not to excuse ("forgive" better?)  him.
How I wanted to give him my shoulder when he was in need. I wanted to offer him my shoulder to cry on when he needs someone.

We grew up together and we used to have good times together. However, it looks  I felt like we are strangers now and I have no haven't a clue about what can I do for him.

(or "I have no idea how to help him").

Fuzhou Forest Park and Fuzhou Zoo

Today,  I am going to the Fuzhou Forest Park and Zoo with my best friend.
In Fuzhou Forest Park,  I see the peach blossoms and Sakuras.  But the peach blossoms are dying and the Sakuras are not yet coming out.  It's a little depressing but the scenery is still very awsome and the air is very fresh.  I like it very much.
In the Fuzhou Zoo, I see the handsome beautiful tiger, leopard and lion and so on.  But they are very exhausted tired-looking.  I feel very sad and hope that they can could become free.
In short, today is a funny day.so happy I am. I'm so happy. 

Don't forget a space after full-top and comma!

It is a little unusual to write such a description in the present tense. Probably it is better to use the past tense.

e.g. "Today I WENT to the zoo. I SAW lions....." etc.