Pollution
In the last twenty years the health of the world is in real dangerous ..We are not able to live without cars,each family throughout the world has more than one.Cars spread nitrogen dioxide in the air,this is the highest pollutant that all countries from Us to China has to fight.Thanks to new rules that protect our air,nitrogen dioxide is decreased in the last years in Usa and Europe.In Italy for example the government is trying to solve this issue by forbidden cars enter in the city center.Using the ‘alternate licence plates’. Unfortunately China,India and Middle East this pollution has grown dramatically.Nasa’s Aura satellite has been tracking global pollution trends for the past decade and it shows how our atmosphere is damaged. All the countries has to cooperate to protect this planet we’ve got claimed a great American politician.
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Pollution
In the last twenty years the health of the world is in real dangerous danger ..We are not able to live without cars and each many families throughout the world has have more than one. Cars spread nitrogen dioxide in the air, and this is the highest worst pollutant that all countries from Us to China has have to fight.Thanks to new rules that protect our air, nitrogen dioxide is has decreased in the last few years in the USA and Europe. In Italy for example the government is trying to solve this issue by forbidden banning cars from entering in the city center. using the ‘alternate licence plates’. Unfortunately in China, India and Middle East this such pollution has grown dramatically. Nasa’s Aura satellite has been tracking global pollution trends for the past decade and it shows how our atmosphere is damaged. All the countries has have to cooperate to protect this the planet we’ve got claimed a great American politician. (don't understand this last phrase?)Remember to out a space after every comma and full-stop.
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Pollution
For the last twenty years the health of the world has been in real dangerous. We are not able to live without cars. Many families throughout the world have more then one. Cars spread nitrogen dioxide in the air. From the US to China, this is the worst pollutant that all countries have to fight.Thanks to new rules that protect our air, nitrogen dioxide has decreased in the past years in the USA and Europe. In Italy, for example, the government is trying to solve this issue by forbidding cars from entering the city center on certain days, by using ‘alternate license plates.' Unfortunately in China, India and the Middle East this pollution has grown dramatically. NASA’s Aura satellite has been tracking global pollution trends for the past decade and it shows how our atmosphere is damaged. All of the countries have to cooperate to protect this planet we’ve got, claims the great American politician Barrack Obama.Good job, try to pay attention to your tenses a bit more when reviewing your work.
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