Fuzhou Forest Park and Fuzhou Zoo
Today,I go to the Fuzhou Forest Park and Zoo with my best friend.
In Fuzhou Forest Park,I see the peach blossoms and Sakuras.But the peach blossoms are dying and the Sakuras are not yet coming out.It's a little depressed.But the scenery is still very awsome and air is very fresh.I like it very much.
In the Fuzhou Zoo, I see the handsome tiger,leopard and lion and so on.But they are very exhausted.I feel very sad and hope that they can become free.
In short, today is a funny day.so happy I am.
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Fuzhou Forest Park and Fuzhou Zoo
Today, I am going to the Fuzhou Forest Park and Zoo with my best friend.In Fuzhou Forest Park, I see the peach blossoms and Sakuras. But the peach blossoms are dying and the Sakuras are not yet coming out. It's a little depressing but the scenery is still very awsome and the air is very fresh. I like it very much.
In the Fuzhou Zoo, I see the handsome beautiful tiger, leopard and lion and so on. But they are very exhausted tired-looking. I feel very sad and hope that they can could become free.
In short, today is a funny day.so happy I am. I'm so happy.
Don't forget a space after full-top and comma!
It is a little unusual to write such a description in the present tense. Probably it is better to use the past tense.
e.g. "Today I WENT to the zoo. I SAW lions....." etc.
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