When the person people dissapear disappear

I was wondering about the end of life, not in a morbid way, but just how we can just dissapear  disappear unexpectedly. We don't think about it, we just live how we are going to live forever. It's so strange think about the people close to us that doesn't don't exist anymore. And we never remember that, we just live day by day, making plans, complaining, dreaming, etc And it's good and bad at the same time. Despite espiritual belivings spiritual believings we have to worry about how we are spending our current time. I hope I'm doing my best.

Good writing practice. Please tell me if you have any questions. - Jason

English slang. People. Chapter one.

All names are fictional. Coincidences aren't random. :)

Today I wanna speak about my friends. I have started learning English slang and this is my first task about this theme. I don't know what I will write exactly, and therefore I won't tell their real names because it might be not not be pleased for by them. But if they will recognize someone I hope they won't beat me for that. :)

So let's go. I have several best buddies. We have know known each other a lot of years. With three of them I went to the same school. And with two of them I even went to the same class. Our crew contains not only school friends. We all are adult peeps and our crew amount is about 5 of the best chums. Their names are Jhon, Bob, Bill, Jack. I hope I didn't forget anyone. I mean, I talk about them those peeps who I see more often than other. About them who They used to get together to go out to a pub to have fun and get totally drunk. But today it those cases are seldom. Because they are adult, strong, brainy men. Several of them have their own family families. Three of them bring up kids. All kiddos are cutie cute and kind. Their tykes aren't adults yet. But someone is some of them are already going to school. One of the kiddos is the a little tyke and he don't doesn't even go to kindergarten.

I can't say about my pals "they are hot" or "he is a stud" because I'm a man, but I think their wives think about them so. I can say about Jack that he is an art whiz - he can draw pictures and play the guitar. About Bob I can say he is a smart cookie because if he wasn't such he wouldn't have his own company for a lot of years. Jhone is some a languages buff and he knows several foreign languages and now he is living in Europe. Bill is the really lucky dude he lives with a really hot wife.

When I was studying in a university there was one dude who tried to get buddy-buddy, but he was wacko and a smarty pants. I couldn't stand it and we couldn't get become buddies.

Good writing practice! Let me know if you have questions about my corrections. - Jason

I'd appreciate your corrections for describing this photo

The photo shows a teacher and students who are in the class of a school/in a class of a school. There are six desks, one/a bookshelf, one/a board, and a picture on the wall of the class school building on to the right of the bookshelf. There are two boys and one girl are sitting/who are sitting on at their desks. The boy on the left of the teacher is sitting on at the first desk. He is wearing a red t-shirt and brown trousers/pants. His bag is on the chair beside him and he is holding a sandwich in his hand. He is looking behind him to at his friends. The boy on the right of the teacher is wearing a cap and t-shirt. He is holding a pen and looking to at his teacher. On the right of him there is a pretty girl who is sitting on at her desk and looking to at her teacher. She's wearing a yellow t-shirt and there are some pencils and a book on her desk. The girl in front of her is trying to get a book from the bookshelf and there is a boy at the back of photo who is wearing a green t-shirt and is holding a red book in his hand. The teacher is looking to at him while she's wearing a yellow dress and giving him a blue book.

Good writing practice. Let me know if you have any questions. - Jason

Semi-formal apology letter

Dear Mr. Brown,
I would like to offer my sincerely sincere apologies for the inconvenience which we made for/caused you. I am aware of the importance of a calm environment in our neighborhood, and I am sincerely sorry for the noise from my apartment on Wednesday.
I had the my wedding anniversary on that day, and I with my husband ordered a banket banquet room in our favorite restaurant. But unfortunately there was a fire, and the restaurant was closed for the repair. We found out about that situation in the morning on Tuesday and thereof therefore had not any time to order a new place to celebrate our family occasion.
One more time I want to apologize for any inconvenience which we made. I understand how crucial is a calm atmosphere at home is, therefore I will never to disturb you again. Please, be aware that we are doing everything to settle this issue. We will never to celebrate feasts at home in the future.
May I apologize again for this inconvenience. I hope that you can forgive this regrettable error.
Yours sincerely,
Victoria Kart

This is written quite well Victoria. Let me know if you have any questions. - Jason

MY NEW GYM

Hi Jan,
Yesterday I went to a new sport club near my home. There's nothing to say except that it's wonderful/There's nothing one thing to say: it's wonderful. The staff is really efficient and qualified. There are a lot of courses that I would like to do/take, starting from x-boxing, gravity and idrobike. But for now I think that I only go to the weight room. You absolutely have to try this new club, it's perfect for you. You can also improve in some sports like tennis. I'm going again there again tomorrow. If I hope I can convince you to came come with me and enter in sign up for/start this wonderful club where people who hate sports must be are happy to do it them.

Some story

In early 20th century, in some Polish house lived three sisters, then when/and one of them gets acquainted with the young military and moves with him to Russia. Two other sisters emigrated to the United States, after which one of them became a lover of the President named John Kennedy. The sister from who lived in Russia didn't like her life there. She suffered. The sisters helped as could as possible as they possibly could/as much as they possibly could/as much as possible. But she stayed in Russia and had a daughter...
Please correct me

Good practice, let me know if you have any questions. - Jason

How much time per day do you spend in the a traffic jam?

How much time per day do you spend in the a traffic jam? If you live in São Paulo, in a year you spend one a month and a half stuck in the a traffic. (It is completely understandable to say "one month and a half..." but it is usually said "a month and a half") 

Did you know that you could save more than 36 hours per month by hitchhiking? Yes, and imagine what you could do in 36 hours!

Do you exercise yourself? You could go the the gym every day and there would still be 16 hours left for you to do whatever you want.

Do you do yoga, mindfulness or something for your mind? You could take more time for you and do one of those things twice a week. There would still be 8 hours left.

Do you see your loved ones constantly? You could spend 2 hours with them every week!

Do you see? If everyone hitches a ride to go to work daily there would be half of the cars in the streets, which means that you will save at least 36 hours per month by hitchhiking.

Yes, with 36 hours you could be healthier, your mind and your body would feel better and you could have time to meet your friends every week.

Interesting, isn't it? Yes, time is money!

Very nice writing, and interesting. - Jason

My shooting experience in the film

One year ago I got a message in Messenger. One girl wrote me about her new film and sent me  a  the script. I read it and wrote/responded that I understand nothing. She said: come to my office and we would will talk.
To tell the truth, when I read the script I thought that it is was  a  total gibberish...
On The other day I came went to her and we were speaking about  a  the film for *(about) almost two hours. I was so inspired by her story, so we made an audition there. It was just on her phone... without professional cameras or something anything like this that. We were the only two in the room. It was like  a  magic, because I caught something that she wanted from me. This is  a  real acting magic for sure.
Then I had to go to my rehearsal in at the Russian Academy of Theatre Arts. I was late for by an hour/I was an hour late... but I felt so much energy inside **(of) me. In At the end of our talking talk she said the wrote would write me after a month. I said ok and I would be waiting for this/I would be looking forward to this, and hope I was good on the audition. ('look forward to' is probably the most common way to say this. 'waiting for' is correct, but 'looking forward to' is with a bit more excitement).

I will be waiting for your response. (only that, waiting for the response)

I will be looking forward to your response. (you are excited to receive the response)

Let me know if you are interested in this story and will continue to write.
And I will be so thankful if you can correct my English mistakes:)

Really good writing practice. You might have some questions of why I corrected something in the way that I did, and that is completely understandable. So write me if have questions. Learning languages is not a science, so there are different ways to use the language. - Jason

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