My girlfriend do a surgery (present tense)
This history can serve as alert for you!!
Is morning and she feels a strong pein in the abdomen on the side of the appendix
She also feels fever and other peins...
So we go to hospital, quickly they attended and, without noticing, she be for the surgery for removal the appendix.
During 30 minutes she stay there.
Happily she leaves and go to repose...
So, the tip is: if you feels a strong pein in the abdomen, go to hospital
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My girlfriend do has a surgery (present tense)
This history story can serve as an alert for you!!It is morning and she feels a strong pein pain in the abdomen on the side of where the appendix is.
She also has a fever/feels feverish and other pains...
So we go to the hospital, quickly they attended attend to us/help us and, without noticing, she be for the is in/has surgery for the removal of the appendix.
During 30 minutes she stay there She is there for 30 minutes.
Happily she leaves and go to repose...
So, the tip is: if you feels feel a strong pain in the abdomen, go to hospital.
Good writing practice Henrique. If you see something like 'has a fever/feels feverish', that means that both are possible. There are different ways to express what you want to say, so if you have any questions, please let me know! - Jason
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My girlfriend had a surgery (present tense)
This story can serve as an alert ("a warning" would be better) for you!!It is morning and she's feeling a strong pain in the abdomen on the side of the appendix
She also has a fever and other pains...
So we went to the hospital, they attended to her quickly and, without noticing, she was sent to appendix removal surgery.
She stayed there for 30 min.
Fortunately she left and went to repose...
So, the tip is: if you feel a strong pain in the abdomen, go to the hospital
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My girlfriend has surgery (present tense)
This experience can serve as a warning for you!!It is morning time and she feels a strong pain in her abdomen on the side of the appendix.
She also has a fever and other pains...
So, we travelled to the hospital and quickly they tend to her and without noticing, she has gone for the surgery for the removal of her appendix.
For 30 minutes she stayed there.
Happily she leaves and goes to rest...
So, the lesson learnt is: If you feel a strong pain in the abdomen, go to the hospital!
I hope your girlfriend is recovering well! Andrea :-)
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