My shooting experience in the film
One year ago I got a message in Messenger. One girl wrote me about her new film and sent me a script. I read it and wrote that I understand nothing. She said: come to my office and we would talk.
To tell the truth, when I read the script I thought that is a total gibberish...
On the other day I came to her and we were speaking about a film about almost two hours. I was so inspired by her story and we made an audition there. It was just on her phone... without professional cameras or something like this. We were only two in the room. It was like a magic, because I caught something that she want from me. This is a real acting magic for sure.
Then I had to go to my rehearsal in the Russian Academy of Theatre Arts. I was late for an hour... but I felt so much energy inside me. In the end of our talking she said the wrote me after a month. I said ok and I would waiting for this, and hope I was good on audition.
Let me know if you are interested in this story and will continue to write.
And I will be so thankful if you can correct my English mistakes:)
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My shooting experience in the film
One year ago I got a message in Messenger. One girl wrote me about her new film and sent me a the script. I read it and wrote/responded that I understand nothing. She said: come to my office and we would will talk.To tell the truth, when I read the script I thought that it is was a total gibberish...
On The other day I came went to her and we were speaking about a the film for *(about) almost two hours. I was so inspired by her story, so we made an audition there. It was just on her phone... without professional cameras or something anything like this that. We were the only two in the room. It was like a magic, because I caught something that she wanted from me. This is a real acting magic for sure.
Then I had to go to my rehearsal in at the Russian Academy of Theatre Arts. I was late for by an hour/I was an hour late... but I felt so much energy inside **(of) me. In At the end of our talking talk she said the wrote would write me after a month. I said ok and I would be waiting for this/I would be looking forward to this, and hope I was good on the audition. ('look forward to' is probably the most common way to say this. 'waiting for' is correct, but 'looking forward to' is with a bit more excitement).
I will be waiting for your response. (only that, waiting for the response)
I will be looking forward to your response. (you are excited to receive the response)
Let me know if you are interested in this story and will continue to write.
And I will be so thankful if you can correct my English mistakes:)
Really good writing practice. You might have some questions of why I corrected something in the way that I did, and that is completely understandable. So write me if have questions. Learning languages is not a science, so there are different ways to use the language. - Jason
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My shooting Experience Shooting a Film
To tell the truth, when I read the script, I thought it was total gibberish...
On the other day I went to see her and we talked about a film for almost two hours. I was so inspired by her story that we had an audition then and there. It was just on her phone... without professional cameras or anything like that. We were the only two in the room. It was like a magic, because I caught something that she wanted from me. This was real acting magic for sure.
Then I had to go to my rehearsal at the Russian Academy of Theatre Arts. I was an hour late for an hour... but I felt so much energy inside me. At the end of our conversation, she said she would write me after a month. I said ok and told her I would look out for it, and that I hoped it was good on audition.
(1) THIS girl... As you know, in English we have two articles: the indefinite A/AN, and the definite THE. But there is a third article we use in stories - THIS. We use it when we first mention someone or something that's going to play an important role in our story.
(2) The next day I WENT... the verb GO is used to refer to movement away from the speaker, and COME towards the speaker. So you WENT to see her.
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