Help me Correct these sentences

After my last project; me and my team talking about each member's pros and cons. My pros were"love to learn, good listener, can work under pressure, learn quickly, good presenter and work with team". In fact some of these pros were acquired in this project as I keep going improve my self. I'm a fresh graduate trying to get a work that every day I can learn from it.

After my last project, me and my team talked about each member's pros and cons. My pros were "loves to learn," "good listener," "can work under pressure," "learns quickly," "good presenter" and "works as a team". In fact, some of these pros were developed during this project as I continue to improve myself. I'm a fresh graduate trying to learn from work every day.

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I had to look up more information on how to use quotations in this manner myself. When you are using quotation marks in a list, punctuation can be tricky. I think it would be best for you to focus on sentence composition rather than punctuation for now. Keep that in mind, but be sure that you use proper tenses when writing sentences. If you are writing about the past, make sure the verbs in rest of the sentence are written in the past tense. Same thing for future and present tenses as well. Good luck!

Healthy lifestyle

Hey guys!
What do you think about a healthy lifestyle?
I heard some time ago that our body is our mind and I agree cause everything that we fill our body in with affects our mind. I'm talking especially about junky food, alcohol and cigarettes/drugs.
So the major thing that we have to do to have an energy to keep going with our exercises is eliminating junk food. The problem is that a lot of people believe that you if you jog in the morning that then you can eat some a cheeseburger in the evening. In my opinion, you have to listen to your body. and If you feel that it does harm to you, just don't do it. Cut it off out.
The second thing is alcohol. I have been working out for a long time. Jumping, playing football, etc. But on every weekend, we had to drink have a few beers and I couldn't can't loose lose these kilograms that I wanted to. So i decided to cut it off out and that was the best idea that I have made at this point in time.
Cheers

Very good!

Take care when using colloqiual expressions such as "cut it out".

Also, watch the tenses of your verbs and make sure they match your sentences. If speaking about the past, all verbs about that sentence should be in past tense. The same applies to present and future tenses as well.

Overall, great work.

An essay : please let me know what my mistakes are. thank you so much

The subject: "A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today. Do you agree or disagree with this sentence? What can be done to reduce violence in our society today?"

There has been considerable debate among people over whether TV programs {having<--(consider replacing with portraying, displaying etc.)} violentce actions could have effects on young individuals?. All societies and governments are searching to find some measure to reduce the amount of violence in society.
It is generally acknowledged that TV programs influence children and young people. Although TV and cinema have many advantages, there are some programs which encourage violence and send a message in favour of being a villain. For example, a program showing a murderer killing people {regarding to help poor people<--(misplaced sentence fragment?)} can set a bad example for young people. AnOther good examples are some programs in which a villain will be a rich person at the end. Young individuals may think to follow the person.
To avoid violence in society, or at least to reduce it, both governments and families are responsible. One measure by governments is to control the media, like cinema and TV programs, to and ban them if the programs incite violence. Another measure is to {put <-- consider replacing with adopt, instill, etc.} some laws for guilt. There has to be some charge if one bothers another one with violent action or behavior so children could be aware of the result of their bad actions. Families, on the other hand, are responsible to help children to distinguish wrong and right. It is necessary for parents to avoid allowing children to watch every kind of TV programs.
To conclude, It is accepted that TV programs which have high amounts of violence influence young people so that children could be encouraged to harm others people. To keep society safe, this is a burden for families and governments to guide young individual towards being a pacifistic person.

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Consider using alternative words. Also, be careful to pluralize words where they are needed and be wary of repeating words too frequently.