What should you do before 30 ?

I love travelling so i want to travel as much as i can(/as possble). I want to learn the culture of another country, meet foreign people, (and) try the special food of each country. The country I want to visit most is America. Because it's a large and modern country. It has 50 states, each state might be as big as my country. I love fitness(/I am passionate about fitness), so I train everyday. I want to train in a gym in America(/American gym), the ones I've seen on TV are very big and modern. In Vietnam, most gyms are not big and don't have enough equipment. I feel very excited when i see the gyms in America so i hope i can train in there one time. I love food, delicious food always makes me feel so excited, I heard that food in America is very cheap and tasty, I don't know if it is correct. That's what I want to do before turning 30. What about you ?

At lære Dansk er meget sværere end jeg troede.(or: Det er meget sværere at lære Dansk end jeg troede)

I den sidste måned har jeg i tre timer hver dag forsøgt at lære Dansk. Med skole, venner og aktiviteter(in danish you don't put a comma after the last item when listen) er det svært til at lære noget i tre time hver dag. Jeg snakker med min familie og mine venner, og det er svært til at finde tid for at sidde ned og studere mine danskbøger og noter. Det hjælper at snakke med min smukke og søde kæreste, fordi vi kan tale dansk med hinanden, men der er så mange andre ting i mit liv som tager tid og ikke hjælper mig til at lære. Disse ting tager meget tid, så jeg kan kun lære lidt. I weekenden kan jeg bruge mere tid på at lave ting og studere, men ikke hver dag i ugen(if you mean weekdays: men ikke i hverdagene). Men jeg er stadig optimistisk! Jeg skal lære Dansk i atten måneder. (if you mean you must learn it within 18 months: jeg skal lære Dansk på atten måneder)

Godnat Italki, og tak fordi du læste min notesbog!

~Jake

notecards: if you mean flashcards, truth is we don't really have a word for it. I usually just say flashcards. Otherwise, you can just say "noter"

Med hjælp fra andre mennesker, er det muligt til at lære noget.

Jeg havde ikke nok tid til at skrive i går. Men jeg forsøger at lære mere dansk hver dag. I dag, ønsker jeg at tale om motivation. Jeg tror at motivation er en af de vigtiste kvaliteter i mennesker, men jeg tror også at mennesker er den vigtiste del af motivation. Uden hjælp fra andre mennekser, kan man ikke lykkes. Jeg er taknemmlig for menneskerne i mit liv, der hjælper mig i mine svære tider.

Det er svært at skrive i dag. Jeg må stadig øge mit ordforråd. Jeg kender ikke ordet for "increase." Jeg skal øge mit ordforråd, så jeg kan skrive flere ord i min notesbog.

Jeg vågnede op i dag, og jeg bestemte at jeg ville ikke kigge på (or: bruge) "Google Translate." Jeg vil ikke bruge det for at lære store eller små ord. Nogle dage bruger jeg det for få hjælp til at få ord, men ikke i dag. Jeg ved ikke hvorfor, men i dag ønskede jeg at forsøge at skrive uden hjælp.

Forresten(starting a sentence with "også" sounds kinda awkward), i dag var en god dag. Jeg havde en test i biologi (or: biologitest). Så havde jeg skole og så Dexter på Netflix. Dexter er interessant, fordi han har et godt liv, men han er voldelig(voldsom=intense, extreme. voldelig=violent. I think that's what you meant?). Efter Dexter, spiste jeg med mine venner og snakkede i telefon med min dejlige kæreste før jeg mødtes med mine andre venner for at drikke vin. Stille og roligt. Det var en god dag.

Jeg er færdig for nu.

~Jake

Comments: Very good! Impressive considernig you didn't use google translate.

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Once there was a king. He had a large empire. One day he thought of roaming around the empire. After he finished roaming around the empire he arrived home. By that time he was very tired. He had gotten many wounds, and bilsters had formed on his feet. He called a cabinet meeting and asked them to build a road which was to be covered with leather so that he wouldn't get injured. All the cabinet ministers were shocked as it would be very expensive to build the leather road but due to fear they could not say anything and gave their approval. One of the aged ministers of his cabinet dared to make a suggestion. He told the king that instead of building a road of leather he could get feet of leather as it would not cost much compared to building a road of leather. The King was very impressed with his suggestion and became happy.

2. Is it correct in English - morning has broken or sun is up (in hindi - subah ho gai hai).

2. Both are correct, but "morning has broken" sounds very oldfashioned to me and while I would fit this story nicely, I would advise using "the sun is up" in everyday conversation