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Please check it for correction Once there was a king. He had a large empire. One day he thought of roaming around the empire. After completion of roaming around the empire he arrived home. By that time he was very tired. He had had got many wounds and bilster formed on his feet. He called cabinet meeting and asked them to build a road which is to be covered with leather so that he wont get injured. All cabinet ministers were shocked as it would be very expensive to build leather road but due to fear they could not say anything and gave their approval. One of the aged ministers of his cabinet dared to put up his suggestion. He told the king that instead of building a road of leather why don’t he get the feet of leather as it would not cost much compared to building road of leather. The King was very impressed of his suggestion and became happy. 2. Is it correct in English - morning has broken or sun is up (in hindi - subah ho gai hai).

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Once there was a king. He had a large empire. One day he thought of roaming around the empire. After he finished roaming around the empire he arrived home. By that time he was very tired. He had gotten many wounds, and bilsters had formed on his feet. He called a cabinet meeting and asked them to build a road which was to be covered with leather so that he wouldn't get injured. All the cabinet ministers were shocked as it would be very expensive to build the leather road but due to fear they could not say anything and gave their approval. One of the aged ministers of his cabinet dared to make a suggestion. He told the king that instead of building a road of leather he could get feet of leather as it would not cost much compared to building a road of leather. The King was very impressed with his suggestion and became happy.

2. Is it correct in English - morning has broken or sun is up (in hindi - subah ho gai hai).

2. Both are correct, but "morning has broken" sounds very oldfashioned to me and while I would fit this story nicely, I would advise using "the sun is up" in everyday conversation

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