Travel destinations

For a long time ago my wife and I have been planning to take a vacation traveling around Europe. We have saved money along this throughout the year and we are going to fly to Europe this December. Our journey is going to start in Paris. We are going to stay there for two days. I want to visit the Louvre Museum, the Eiffel Tower and any other hidden places no such that aren't as famous. After this, we are going to travel to Rome. We are going to visit the "Coliseum". Other cities we are planning to visit are: Athens (because I'm a fan of Greek culture), Istanbul, Munich and Amsterdam. I hope we can have enough lots of fun in these places.

EDITORS NOTE:
Good job. Enjoy your trip :)

First entry

Today is my first day in on this website, and I don't even know about what should I write first what I should write about first (right words just needed to be reordered :) GJ ). I just hope I can meet nice people to chat with and that we can help each other to improve our language level literacy. I'll tell list some things about me:
-I like reading on my free in my spare time (apart from the books that I must read for my degree). I also like videogames and listening to music.
-I'm really interested in ancient mythologies like such as Greek, Nordic and Egyptian.
-I would like to travel around Europe in the future. I made a list of must-visit must-see countries list not too long ago.

If you want to know anything else, just ask.

EDITORS NOTE:
Welcome to the site Javi :) One note to make is that must-visit is not actually a word. It could possibly be slang but must-see is actually a word so that is why I made that substitution. Your English skills are already great and I can relate to wanting to travel around Europe while listening to music and talking about ancient mythologies. Take care.

Sports in my city. Could you help me? :)

The objective of this report is to suggest what type of sporting activities the town should offer and encourage between for its young inhabitants. and Also, the report is needed in order to show this these young people how doing playing these sports will benefit them, either in a healthy way or by making new friends.

We have a town full of opportunities with regards to sports, because it has a lot of facilities and building(s) totally prepared completely dedicated for to the practice of a lot of playing multiple/different/various sports. We will start talking about the most important sport of the country: football soccer (Just kidding :P). We have a lot of fields, in which this sport can be practiced, and . A lot list of places in which young people will enjoy playing in include: 5 grass fields, 5 stadiums and so on (you can say "and so on and so forth" or you can say "etc."). We have 30 trainers too, who will help the children to improve their abilities.

Another important sport that we can find in our city, it is tennis. We have numerous courts, which involves includes the most important court of the region, which is called, “La Laguna”. It has 8 courts in it, and it will provide a lot of features and possibilities to the young people of our town.

We can tell know that these activities will provide a healthy way of life to the young people in our area because these activities are completely prepared for being a good start of teaching young people how doing playing sports can provide them with benefits and such as joy, while at the same time that they are learning, making friends and having a nice time.

Isabel

EDITORS NOTE:
Another great job. You are able to articulate your thoughts well and have a great vocabulary. I would encourage you to continue to develope your vocabulary. The one area I am noticing that could be looked at more closely is "run-on sentences". A run-on sentence is when two complete sentences are joined with words like "and". Sometimes such sentences can be completely legitimate but most of the time I prefer to end the sentence and have 2 sentences instead of one really long one. Very minor details though. Great job again. From reading your work I would say you should be easily able to handle yourself in an English speaking country. Take care and until next time.

Being famous!

Being famous is a goal that a lot of people would like to have success in, but it is in fact, is difficult to reach. We can see a lot of famous people in a lot of different aspects of our lives, like in the films, in football, in politics etc… In any topic that you can imagine, you will be able to find some famous people that are recognizable by someone.

Despite this, we can think about being famous as the best thing in the world,. We must also think about the advantages and drawbacks that this aspect will provide. It has Does it just have advantages? Or can you find disadvantages too? Even though being famous could give you the possibility of being wealth(y) and notice(d) by everyone, it could make you as so famous as that you couldn’t go anywhere without being notice(d), and without privacy, even if you go to the supermarket or just outside for a walk.

On the other hand, some people would prefer being famous, forgiving this drawback(deleted s), because it is their dream or whatever. In my opinion, I think that being famous could give you the opportunity of having an easier life, but not in all the aspects of your life. You should think about each part. Think about each aspect of being famous before it would be too late to change it. Maybe having a good job and a normal life would be better than been being followed every day without time to breath.

EDITORS NOTE: Great job! There were not a whole lot of changes that had to be made and the ones that were made were only small mistakes. If you have any questions or need clarification feel free to just send me a message. Great job once again. Take care

The Opened Door

Why do (without the "do" it's more of a statement than a question) I think that it is necessary to learn a language like English if I live in a country where we just speak Spanish? I could want to travel to meet new people, but it that (want used previously is future tense whereas it is more present tense so you were switching tenses)  is not the main reason.

The knowledge is more diffused in English than in Spanish and is technically more precise. We are studyng studying engineering and I would like to learn complex things that where they were researched, they were universally diffused in English.

For some countries, like mine, the English is like a an (can't have two vowels next to each other for different words like a opened. Vowels: a,e,i,o,u sometimes y) opened door. I think that in the future, that door could be the Chinese and Indian language. We will look at how both countries will grow in the future.

EDITORS NOTE: I think you did a really good job. The mistakes were very small overall. The last two sentences however I don't feel they really articulate what you're trying to say. I think you are trying to say the English language opens a lot of doors for you and that door could eventually be Chinese (proper Mandarin/Cantonese) and/or an Indian (<--notice "an I") language. Overall great job and keep up the good work :)

Could someone review this letter? THANK YOU AGAIN!

Dear friend:

Thank you for your letter. I am really happy that you wrote me about this. I have to say I play many sports such as football, tennis, biking and swimming. But nowadays, my favorite sport is swimming. This is my favorite sport because when I am playing this sport my back doesn’t hurt and my back hurt a lot before. In addition I am very happy when I finish swimming. Also, with this sport you can become very fit.

I want to join a club in my city and take part in some competitions. I would like it a lot.

What about you? What is your favorite sport? Why do you play it?

Best regards,

Jose.