Young people don’t pay enough attention to their health and fitness

Young people generally don’t think about the benefits or the things that having a good diet and exercising will provide them with. having a good diet or doing exercise. They usually pay more attention to other substantial various/common/multiple/(or no word at all) things like going out at night every week, eating fast food, riding a motorbike, etc.

They think that this these types of things, either i.e. following a good and healthy diet or doing exercising are not important things to do. They just say that these things are not for them, that they need to have fun and forget about this these types of things, and that they will do it when they get older. We have to say that they are wrong, because with respect to diet, exercise and common knowledge, that, following the base statements about a healthy live life will provide them with a better life as a whole, a better daily life and an improvement of in their mental and body physical health, Which. This will in turn help them in order to be better in their studies (be better students/achieve higher grades/be more studious) and in their jobs (careers, places of employment, at work).

We know that it is important to have friends, to have fun and to go out in order to feel better, but . However, we also know that it is equally as important as this having a good healthy way of life. which it will not consist in avoiding things like having friends or having a good time out of your home. They just need to take conscience about understand that having a good time is compatible with a good way of life.

I think that if they follow a good plan, involving a good diet and the practice of a pair of playing sports, they will give them have a better vision of the for their life, and  while at the same time they can be that will not avoid them of doing the things that they like to do. Follow both things and your life as a teenager will be better!

Isabel

Editors Note: Good job Isabel. The one sentence at the end there kind of confused me though because it seems as if you were saying initially that having friends is important yet later state that a healthy life doesn't consist of having friends? Other than that still just minor problems with changing tenses and multiples compared to singles i.e. friend vs friends. Great job. PS - I tried to throw in multiple ways of saying things to try to help with your vocabulary. If it doesn't help just let me know and I won't edit it like that anymore. Take care :)