Could someone review this letter? THANK YOU AGAIN!
Dear friend:
Thank you for your letter. I am really happy you write me about this. I have to say I practice many sports, for example: football, tennis, biking and swimming. But nowadays, my favorite sport is swimming. This is my favorite sports because from I am playing this sport my back doesn’t hurt, and before my back hurts a lot. In addiction I am seem very good when I finish swimming, and with this sport you can be very fit.
I want to join in a club of my city, and I could take part in some competition, I would like it a lot.
What about you? What is your favorite sport? Why do you practice it?
Best regards,
Jose.
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Could someone review this letter? THANK YOU AGAIN!
Dear friend:
Thank you for your letter. I am really happy that you wrote me about this. I have to say I play many sports such as football, tennis, biking and swimming. But nowadays, my favorite sport is swimming. This is my favorite sport because when I am playing this sport my back doesn’t hurt and my back hurt a lot before. In addition I am very happy when I finish swimming. Also, with this sport you can become very fit.
I want to join a club in my city and take part in some competitions. I would like it a lot.
What about you? What is your favorite sport? Why do you play it?
Best regards,
Jose.
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