Sports in my city. Could you help me? :)

The objective of this report is to suggest what type of sporting activities the town should offer and encourage between for its young inhabitants. and Also, the report is needed in order to show this these young people how doing playing these sports will benefit them, either in a healthy way or by making new friends.

We have a town full of opportunities with regards to sports, because it has a lot of facilities and building(s) totally prepared completely dedicated for to the practice of a lot of playing multiple/different/various sports. We will start talking about the most important sport of the country: football soccer (Just kidding :P). We have a lot of fields, in which this sport can be practiced, and . A lot list of places in which young people will enjoy playing in include: 5 grass fields, 5 stadiums and so on (you can say "and so on and so forth" or you can say "etc."). We have 30 trainers too, who will help the children to improve their abilities.

Another important sport that we can find in our city, it is tennis. We have numerous courts, which involves includes the most important court of the region, which is called, “La Laguna”. It has 8 courts in it, and it will provide a lot of features and possibilities to the young people of our town.

We can tell know that these activities will provide a healthy way of life to the young people in our area because these activities are completely prepared for being a good start of teaching young people how doing playing sports can provide them with benefits and such as joy, while at the same time that they are learning, making friends and having a nice time.

Isabel

EDITORS NOTE:
Another great job. You are able to articulate your thoughts well and have a great vocabulary. I would encourage you to continue to develope your vocabulary. The one area I am noticing that could be looked at more closely is "run-on sentences". A run-on sentence is when two complete sentences are joined with words like "and". Sometimes such sentences can be completely legitimate but most of the time I prefer to end the sentence and have 2 sentences instead of one really long one. Very minor details though. Great job again. From reading your work I would say you should be easily able to handle yourself in an English speaking country. Take care and until next time.