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Transport and reportingreported speech.
Nowadays, we are studying /Recently, we have been studying reportingreported speech in our English class. So I'm going to write about transport trying to use reportingreported speech in order to improve my vocabulary about transport and to find /identify my faults about /in reportingreported speech. I'm going to invent a story.
Yesterday, I meet met with friends and the conversation topic /topic of conversation was transport. Why this topic I thought, but oh well, there was to speak about something something to say about it / it was something to talk about.
Firstly, one of my friends asked me what my favourite form of transport was and I said to him that my favourite was the plane, because it was /is a very fast, comfortable way to go from a place to other one one place to another. I said that I always preferred to sit down on a aisle seat. Then he said that if he could choose the seat, he would always choose a window seat.
Then, I asked him if he had travelled by car for more than 8 hours long and he said that he had never travelled so /that long by car. He said that he would prefer to travel by coach, because he had never liked to drive.
Finally, when I asked all my friend where we will to go on holidays this summer, all of them said we would/should go to the beach by train.mistakes
suggestions
I have provided better alternatives / my alternative
I am returning the favour- this is a good piece of text, well done :) Hope to help you out again soon.
0 votedApril 23, 20150- Las campanas publicitarias nos controlan Necesito dar un monologo corto en esta frase: 'Las campanas publicitarias nos controlan' Por favor, puedes comprobar mi esfuerzo, necesito mejorar mi comunicación!!! Yo puedo ayudarte con tus ensayos ingleses :) • Si quisiera un mensaje ser extendido, pienso que la industria publicitaria tiene mucho poder persuasivo hacerlo efectivamente. • La tecnología crea otra dimensión para la publicidad especialmente con el crecimiento de comprar por internet, significa que es más fácil para alcanzar los consumidores. • Lo qué es más, Google monitoriza los sitios web que visitas y los anota. Después cuándo estás navegando la red, el buscador te recordará que completar la compra • Alguna opina que la publicidad provee una imagen lo que llegamos a admirar y a menudo nos esforzamos lograr este concepto de belleza retocada para nosotros mismos. • Sin embargo personalmente no creo que el impacto de la publicidad sea tan superficial que simplemente aumenta el deseo para la perfección física, pienso que es posible que influya nuestro proceso de pensamiento y nuestra actitud a la vida. • Otro lado, la publicidad podría tener una influencia positiva, puede desafiar los estereotipos y promocionar un cambio en la sociedad, hay ejemplos en las campanas de ‘Dove’ y algunas restaurantes. • He notado en campañas recientes, un gran énfasis en mejorando el medio ambiente y parece que los negocios están desarrollando objetivos más altruistas aunque sospecho que esta tendencia sea para ganar la confianza de los clientes. • Además la publicidad a menudo se centra en temas emotivos para provocar la empatía en la audiencia y causar un deseo para el producto o servicio, en otras palabras la publicidad puede manipular nuestro comportamiento para un lucro… ya que después de todo es un negocio.April 23, 2015120
- Una persona a la que admiras Hola, tengo un encargo para escribir sobre una persona a la que admiro. Elegí mi madre, pero sé que hay muchos errores, por favor ayudame corregirlos. Puedo ayudarte con tu inglés. Gracias! -Mi madre es una persona quien me apoya, me escucha y comparte conmigo los buenos y malos momentos. -Para mí, la familia no tiene una fecha de caducidad ya que como dice, la sangra se llama -puedo confiar mi madre y hablar abiertamente sobre problemas y pensamientos consiga(/o??). -Anima comunicación entre los miembros de mi familia así que discutimos y resolvimos juntos nuestros problemas -Para una madre ella es bastante moderna y comprensiva, siempre me anima a aprovechar las oportunidades especialmente para viajar o trabajar y la independencia. -Apoya la educación y generalmente cree que academia y mi carrera es muy importante. -Ella misma (She, herself?) es una doctora y es una persona muy motivada además de trabajadora. -Mi madre es una persona solidaria, asegura seguridad y armonía, me explica cosas que no entiendo y no se rinde conmigo - a menudo en situaciones difíciles y desafiantes, pienso simplemente ¿Qué haría mi madre? (What would my mother do?) -hace una diferencia significativa en mi vida y es siempre presente para ofrecer su apoyo y su opinión Un espejo –Aunque somos personas muy diferente, se veo como un modelo a seguir (I see her as a role model) -ella guía y enseña, y es debido a ella en parte, que tengo los valores y la autoestima que poseo (it is partly due to her that I have the values and self-esteem that I possess?) -creo que tenemos respeto mutuo entre nos (between us), y espero que ella sea orgullosa de mí (proud of me?) -Da un buen ejemplo de la capacidad mantener un equilibrio entre trabajo y vida. Importancia de familia para mí -En general, me siento que tengo mucha suerte para tener una madre y una familia tan maravillosa -No son perfectas pero me han hecho la persona que soy hoy. (They have made me the person I am today)April 27, 2014150
Quo vadis Europe?
When I was child, Spain was accepted as a member of the European Community. At the time it was really good for Spain because the country was in an economical critical situation. Of course, it was good for others countries too, because business became easier and new, big markets were opened.
I used to hear all the politicians on TV describe Europe as a big and a wonderful project. That project meant human rights, brotherhood, the sharing of successful policies.... They used to say the new Europe was built not just for economic interest, but also social issues.
But all these conjectures were false. When Greece suffered a crisis the other European countries refused to help its. Greece probably made a lot of mistakes and they spent more money that they had, but it is a member of the European Community and so the rest of the countries should help it. If they had helped Greece at the time, the crisis would have been less damaging. Each country cares about their own interests and this is not good for Europe. I think Schengen area is just for the money and business, not for the people.
On the 25th of May it will be European Parliament elections but as now I don´t trust the European project, I will not vote.<em>Well done Raul, your writing is interesting and the grammar is fairly accurate. When you say 'European project' do you mean the EU (European Union)? I have made a few corrections, I hope it helps!</em>
0 votedApril 18, 20141- Es importante aprender otro idioma. Despues mi reciente viaje por Europe, he decidido que debo mejorar mi nivel de Espanol, porque no es suficientemente bueno. Soy una estudiante en Inglaterra y aprendí un poco de espanol en mi escuela pero ahora necesito practicar tanto hablar como el escrito. Mucha gente les gustarían aprender el inglés pero (los ingleses) debemos también aprender otros idiomas para la integración cultural y el respeto por otros paises. Lo siento, yo sé que cometí unos errores, por favor ayudarme y apreciaría las correciones si posible. Gracias y que tenga un buen día!September 3, 2013102
"Ginga Tetsudou no Yoru" Could you please correct my sentences? I would appreciate it. Thanks.
I have just read a book called “Ginga Tetsudou no Yoru”.
It was written by a famous Japanese author Kenji Miyazawa a long time ago.
I heard this novel was incomplete and I believe it because I found some gaps.
It was a little difficult to understand the story. A boy called Giovanni is on a train journey and finds his friend Campanella on the train. Together they travel to the Milky Way together where they meet some people who are dying. They learn about what real happiness is during the trip.When Giovanni returns to the real world, Campanella has disappeared and many people are congregating around a pond. They say Campanella fell into the pond and has passed away.
I’m not sure if the story was just Giovanni’s dream or not. I think the story is related to a religion.
Before I read this book, I thought it might be a fantasy book but it wasn’t, so I felt a little disappointed. However, I thought when I die, I want to travel the Milky Way, because I imagine the scenery there is beautiful. I want to try to see it. ^^Hope that helps, sounds like a strange book! :)
0 votedSeptember 2, 20131The trip 2
Afterwards, we returned to the highway and drove 100 km, placidly without any problems.
All seemed to be going well when the tyre of Walter's motorbike exploded.
Fortunately, he managed to stop the bike, which for a moment seemed out of control.
Again we were on the side of the road facing a new inconvenience.
Later, Daniel and David set off carrying the wheel that we had previously disassembled.
We expected that they had found someone who could repair the tyre.
It wouldn't be hard if we weren't about 300 km away from the city in the middle of the nowhere.Good work!
0 votedMay 28, 20131
