"Ginga Tetsudou no Yoru" Could you please correct my sentences? I will appreciate you. Thanks.
I’ve just read a book that titled “Ginga Tetsudou no Yoru”.
It was written by a famous Japanese author Kenji Miyazawa a long time ago.
I heard this novel was not completed. I can’t doubt it because I found some blank parts.
It was a little difficult to understand the story. A boy named Giovanni who rode on a train. He found his friend Campanella on there, so they traveled the Milky Way together. They met some people who were dying. They learned about what the real happy is during the trip. When Giovanni returned to the real world, Campanella disappeared, and many people were around a pond. They said Campanella fell into the pond. He passed away.
I’m not sure if the story was just Giovanni’s dream or not. I think the story is related to a religion.
Before I read this book, I thought it might be a fantasy book but it wasn’t, so I felt a little sad. However, I thought when I will die, I want to travel the Milky Way, because I imagined some scenery were beautiful. I want to try to see them. ^^
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"Ginga Tetsudou no Yoru" Could you please correct my sentences? I would appreciate it. Thanks.
I have just read a book called “Ginga Tetsudou no Yoru”.
It was written by a famous Japanese author Kenji Miyazawa a long time ago.
I heard this novel was incomplete and I believe it because I found some gaps.
It was a little difficult to understand the story. A boy called Giovanni is on a train journey and finds his friend Campanella on the train. Together they travel to the Milky Way together where they meet some people who are dying. They learn about what real happiness is during the trip.
When Giovanni returns to the real world, Campanella has disappeared and many people are congregating around a pond. They say Campanella fell into the pond and has passed away.
I’m not sure if the story was just Giovanni’s dream or not. I think the story is related to a religion.
Before I read this book, I thought it might be a fantasy book but it wasn’t, so I felt a little disappointed. However, I thought when I die, I want to travel the Milky Way, because I imagine the scenery there is beautiful. I want to try to see it. ^^
Hope that helps, sounds like a strange book! :)
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Hi Shanta,
Thank you so much for your correction.
Oh, it’s not strange book! (haha) A lot of people gave a high praise to the book.
Yes, you helped me a lot. Thanks. :)
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