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Essay about a foreign language
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
There are different opinions regarding the teaching of a foreign language.
On one hand, there are people who consider it right best for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school.
On the other hand, there are people who think the opposite: they believe that it's better for children to begin learning a foreign language at secondary school. In my opinion, I agree with the first group.
It's important to analyze some points to make a judgment.
Firstly, the greatest speed of children's learning is obvious. Children every day aquire new skills with an astonishing simplicity. In addition we could also talk about the copious number of linguistic's studies about the innate children's ability in the learning of the language. This suggests us that the human's brain has a particular genetic specialization finalized to the language.(I'm not sure what you want to say, but finalized does not make sense here.)
Secondly, we have to say that children have more time to learn. In fact, adolescents and adults have more tasks and less time to devote to learning foreign languages. Furthermore not all people could finish their studies.
To conclude, It's clear that it is better to begin learning a foreign language as soon as possible.0 votedOctober 11, 20141so happy
Today I had my hair cut. I like this style very much.
And today I was had been paid by/for from my part-time job in this winter vacation.
I like my life,my parents and myself.
Notes: It's a tricky sentence with a couple options to sound more fluent...
"And today I was paid for my part-time job this winter vacation."
You can also write: "And today I was paid for my part time work this past winter vacation."
OR: "And today I got paid for my part time work from this winter vacation."
Any combination of those sounds a little better. Be careful about using And to start a sentence. In strict English classes and rules, I was taught, a long time ago, that this is not formally acceptable, but nowadays we see it often.
0 votedMarch 1, 20141Communication in the Modern World
Some of my friends believe that the modern technology gives us tremendous advantages. They can't imagine their lives without computers, tablets, smartphones and especially the Internet. On the one hand all of this variety of high-tech innovations is very useful for us, but on the other hand we are lacking a sense of real communication with people. If you need to find any information or you have some question, all you need to do is just to make a request on the Internet. In a second you get what you wanted. It is very simple, but in this way case we have become started communicating with each other much less than it was in the past.
Thank you.
NOTES:You don't have write the Internet but it is more common that way. It works both ways :)
I would say "variety" is singular so "innovation" should be too.The last sentence is a little tricky. I think it sounds more fluent to say started rather than become. It also might sound more fluent to say, "It is very simple, but in this way we have started to communicate with..."
Overall, very good job!
0 votedMarch 1, 20141- Trois histoires, un qui est fausse.. Trois histoires: Un jour quand j’etais jeune, je suis retourné a la maison de mes parents après l’école. J’ai deja entendu nos chien avant d’être entré dans la maison parce qu’elle m’a senti. A ce moment quand je suis entré dans la maison, nos chien a sauté et ébréché mes dents. Quand j’ai eu dix-huit ans, j’ai joué du foot avec l’equipe de ma lycée. A la fin de la saison on a gagné le grand tournoi de l’état de Floride. Il y avais un découvreur de talents dans la publique de la final qui m’a regardé et a la fin de la match, il m’a offert un post dans l’equipe de la université de Virginia. Il y a 4 ans quand mon ami et moi sont allé pour faire un petit promenade. Dans les rues de Copenhague, il y a été beaucoup de gens. À votre surprise, mon ami a jetté un oiel sur la terre et il a vu dix mille krona en espèces dans un petit sac. On est allé dans le magasin du Mac et il a acheté un nouveau ordinateur toute suite.February 21, 201420
- Traduction de la publicité Dans ce publicité pour O2 nous ecoutons a le voix d'un homme, qui est le chat qui on voit. Il dit, "J'étais un chat... Tous les jours le même. Je suis été désinvolte par le dejeuner... et puis, froidement indifférent aprés. À mon avis, toute etait juste 'heinnn.' Subitement il est devenu clair! Pourquoi etre trop chat. Pourquoi pas etre plus... Chien. Écoute-moi, regarde la planète aujourd'hui. Il est extraordinaire. À courir, Extraordinaire! À pourchasser des voitures, Extraordinaire! Des batons, Extraordinaire. 'Carpe diem' ...Ca veut dire 'Agrippez la disque.' Peut-être nous devions toute sois un peu plus chien." Àpres ça la commentateur dit "Etre plus chien. Commencer maintenant a bemoredog.com"November 19, 201310
