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So happy
Today, I had my hair cut, I like this style very much. And today had been paid I also received my pay from my the part-time job I had over the in this winter vocation holidays. I like my life, my parents and myself.
so happy
Today I had my hair cut. I like this style very much.
And today I was had been paid by/for from my part-time job in this winter vacation.
I like my life,my parents and myself.
Notes: It's a tricky sentence with a couple options to sound more fluent...
"And today I was paid for my part-time job this winter vacation."
You can also write: "And today I was paid for my part time work this past winter vacation."
OR: "And today I got paid for my part time work from this winter vacation."
Any combination of those sounds a little better. Be careful about using And to start a sentence. In strict English classes and rules, I was taught, a long time ago, that this is not formally acceptable, but nowadays we see it often.
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