Communication in the Modern World

Some of my friends believe that modern technology gives us tremendous advantages. They can't imagine their lives without computers, tablets, smartphones and especially the Internet. On the one hand this variety of high-tech innovations is very useful to us, but on the other hand we aren't communicating with real people as often as we used to. If you have a question or want to find out more about something all you need to do is search for it on the Internet, and in a split second you have all the information you need. It's very simple, but it is the case that we are communicating with each other much less than we did in the past.

Thank you.

Well done.

Communication in the Modern World

Some of my friends believe that the modern technology gives us tremendous advantages. They can't imagine their lives without computers, tablets, smartphones and especially the Internet. On the one hand all of this variety of high-tech innovations is very useful for us, but on the other hand we are lacking a sense of real communication with people. If you need to find any information or you have some question, all you need to do is just to make a request on the Internet. In a second you get what you wanted. It is very simple, but in this way case we have become started communicating with each other much less than it was in the past.

Thank you.

NOTES:

You don't have write the Internet but it is more common that way.  It works both ways :)
I would say "variety" is singular so "innovation" should be too.

The last sentence is a little tricky.  I think it sounds more fluent to say started rather than become. It also might sound more fluent to say, "It is very simple, but in this way we have started to communicate with..."

Overall, very good job!