Makankousappou

I found a very funny news story on the net.

It said that a recent trend for Japanese high school girls is taking photos of Makankousappou.
This means that each girl poses in different ways, like doing martial arts skills from anime Dragon Ball as if they are really fighting. However I think this is not Makankousappou.

[I tried! It was hard to follow what you meant.]

http://www.j-cast.com/2013/04/09172660.html?p=all

The following is real Makankousappou.

http://www.google.co.jp/imgres?imgurl=http://www.deviantart.com/download/113358162/dragonball___makankosappo_by_nostal-d1vhnpu.png&imgrefurl=http://nostal.deviantart.com/art/Makankosappo-113358162&h=1063&w=1470&sz=1249&tbnid=R9MROSD8Sps9jM:&tbnh=90&tbnw=124&zoom=1&usg=__ed6pnG8fdJiv6uoQhZJDuRaQl8A=&docid=I9MEyb5iCCKQWM&sa=X&ei=PIFjUbC-EYykiQeM2YD4AQ&ved=0CDcQ9QEwAA&dur=1780

pp46-47

(This passage is translated from a Japanese book. Corrections welcomed!)

Don't Make An Excuse

On that day, you didn't take that one step forward.
Don't make it an excuse for not doing your best now.

From now on,
I want to be a person who makes the most of the present.


"Take it easy," the instructor called out to him.
The boy bashfully dropped his eyes.
Those boys who write elegant things like proverbs and slogans
often put unnecessary strain on themselves, harden their faces, and cannot relax.
Since they are perfectionists, they cannot stand their own deficiency.
They often become unstable, and sometimes end up committing crimes.
It's okay to take it easy sometimes.
If you can allow yourself weaknesses, your life is going to be easier.

The yellow parts are things that didn't sound right in English and needed to be changed.

The other things are okay, but the suggestions I listed sound better. Nobel isn't really used like that in English.  I thought about putting in concise or clever, but it didn't have the same double meaning that I suspect the author intended (proverbs and slogans are very short, an elegant solution is a quick, short solution AND an elegant man dresses and acts like a gentleman, which is what a nobel man does as well)  Elegant might be the English word to use.  And the word "those" can be on that line, it just sounds a little better if it's not.

You did a good job. :)

[I rewrote this for you.]

I feel better

Yesterday,my friend told me some things about H7N9.  For example, a 27 year old man died. Since the H7N9 epidemic began, I have not been afraid.  But now, I read that the 27 year old man died, and it worries me because it happened so fast.  After 7 days, he was gone.  I am afraid.  

Yesterday, after I finished work, I felt hot.  I thought that I had a fever.  I was worried that maybe I had the H7N9 virus.  But this morning, I felt better.  I did not feel hot, and I did not have a fever.  I was happy!

*When you say "feel better," you are telling another person to feel better. Using it about yourself is grammatically correct, but it doesn't make sense. You would say "I feel better" or "I'm feeling better"

I didn't really understand this part: "i lived that hourse some old women feed hen and cock,it is not better."

El clon

I'm watching "el clon" now.  It's the best story ever.  I watch it that every night. In the story, a Brazilian girl (named Jade) moved to Marruecos when her mother died. She tries to follow the customs. But She knows Lucas, a brazilian guy, who is on a trip. They fall in love, but everything is difficult because of the new customs. The name is "el clon" because a doctor made a clone of Lucas. After a lot of things happen and after many years, Jade knows him! Well, I can't tell all the whole story because is very long, but I love it!

Note: I marked some things that aren't grammatically incorrect but sound a little odd in yellow (as well as punctuation).

You could write one of the phrases I corrected as: "I can't tell all of the story" or "I can't tell the whole story"

It's Friday!

Finally, [<-- this comma is optional] tomorrow is Friday. I couldn't wait any more. This week has been exhausting with too much school work to do. I'm happy but tired.
My plans for the weekend include: watching New Girl, studying English, and doing my school work.

Yeah, I have no social life.  Haha :)

I corrected your punctuation though I suspect you're at a level where you know the proper rules.  :)

I'm learning English englihs

Hello, I'm learning English english because becouse I need it for my work.

Remember: Capitalize the first letter of all languages in English (for example: Italian, German, Russian). :)

Dumb...

It's been a long time since the last time I had the an oportunity to talk with somebody, and today I had a chance to could do it again. It was good, but kind of embarrasing for me. I haven't practiced practice enough, so I think that I gave stupid answers. I feel bad for Sorry about the guy who that had to put up with me me up. Keep in mind guys: You should always practice. hahaha

Note: Very few of your mistakes are grammatically incorrect. :)

Remember the pronoun "who" is used for people.  This is a common mistake even for native speakers.

"To put me up (for the night)" [the entire phrase] means to give someone a place to stay for the night (usually a friend).  You were thinking of the phrase "to put up with me."