Feel better
Yesterday,my friend told me about H7N9 things,about a 27years old man died,since china happend H7N9 epidemic situation,i am not afraid, but i read that 27 years oldman died ,i feel not good, because it too fast ,7days he 's gone,i feel fear,and i lived that hourse some old women feed hen and cock,it is not better.
yesterday i worked end ,i feel hot ,feel have a fever,worried i got h7n9 epidemic situation.
A night gone , i feel better, not hot and i didn't have a fever,happyness....
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I feel better
Yesterday,my friend told me some things about H7N9. For example, a 27 year old man died. Since the H7N9 epidemic began, I have not been afraid. But now, I read that the 27 year old man died, and it worries me because it happened so fast. After 7 days, he was gone. I am afraid.
Yesterday, after I finished work, I felt hot. I thought that I had a fever. I was worried that maybe I had the H7N9 virus. But this morning, I felt better. I did not feel hot, and I did not have a fever. I was happy!
*When you say "feel better," you are telling another person to feel better. Using it about yourself is grammatically correct, but it doesn't make sense. You would say "I feel better" or "I'm feeling better"
I didn't really understand this part: "i lived that hourse some old women feed hen and cock,it is not better."
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