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Makeing Karaage
I maked made Karaage.
Karaage is that chicken go to fried in very hot oil.
material is Ingredients:chicken
ginger
garlic
soy sauce
egg
potato powder
Preparation:
Step 1 :
chicken go to object of mix 15 minute that mix ginger,garlic,soy souceMix together ginger, garlic and soy sauce for 15 minutes.
Step 2:
chicken mix a potato powder and go to eggMix potato powder and the egg.
Step 3:
Fry chicken go to in oil (oil's temperature is should be 180ºC). Wait 1 minute 30 seconds
take chicken and cold and put the chicken in the fridge. Wait 4 minutes 30 seconds
and then fry the chicken go oil again. Wait 40 seconds.
Making Karaage GorlA few notes:
-When describing a recipe, make sure to use cooking verbs!
-Also, recipes have a specific format in English. You have to make a list of ingredients and then how to prepare it (which you did right). You also have to say how much of each ingredient is needed and mention them all in the ingredients list!!
-Use "and" to connect ideas and periods (.) to end sentences. We begin a new sentence with a capital letter.
I hope I corrected it without changing the meaning!
Best wishes
0 votedMarch 22, 20141Why do international sports competitions sometimes encourage strong nationalism?
Analyzing the development of national sport, it can be considered, that unfortunately such types of competitions sometimes promote strong nationalism. Indeed, a lot of people, watching the Olympics, for instance, associate themselves with national athletes and teams. In this way, usual fans from different countries became competitors and a kind of national separation on national type is created.
Thinking about this issue, firstly I need to talk say about the positive aspects of this one. Namely, it is absolutely normal to feel happy* with the results of your country and to hope that they became better than other ones. It is called patriotism and as the more we feel it, as the stronger our country became becomes. For example, I am really brave with proud of* the thirty three medals of our national team won in the last Olympic Games, but also I respect foreign athletes, because they deserve their results by from years of strong training. Moreover, each member of participating in national competitions deserves to be respected.
Unfortunately, the negative aspect of such tournaments is also exists, that is, encouraging of nationalism, which is shown by seen in unacceptable behavior of fans, for instance. Especially it can especially be seen on at football matches when fans from two different countries make a scrimmage, throw fires flares to at each other and cetera. It happens not so often doesn't happen often though.
Another thing which should be mentioned is a lot of are the many stereotypes in sports and many of them is are national. For example, the possibilitiesy of gain being successful in some sport areas are not available for certain countries. And as I think, we should not stress pay a lot of attention to talking about these possibilities, especially in a unrespectable disrespectful way.
In conclusion, I want to stress how important it is to respect each other in sports competitions and to find a balance between following national interests and argue by national type*.*Not very sure what you meant here
Be careful with punctuation and subject-verb agreement!
Best wishes!
0 votedMarch 22, 20140The Epic of Gilgamesh
Yesterday I finished reading "The Epic of Gilgamesh" which in my opinion may be of interest to contemporary people because the poem's heroes as ours as have the passions as ours. To disgrace Enkidu Gilgamesh sends the a prostitute called Shamhat to him. And in the end she tempts him so the great warrior gives up and loses his extraordinary glory. After he has engaged in fornication the wild animals (his close friends-beasts) leave him and he stays alone.
On an example of life this poem heroes's we can notice how sin affects a person's life and how in a jiffy in little time the a great warrior can lose his glory.A few tips:
-Don't begin sentences with conjunctions (such as because, and...)
-Plurals for words that already end in s have the apostrophe after.
-"In a jiffy" is too informal for a written text like this one, in my opinion.
-Revise the difference between "the" and "a"
Best wishes!
0 votedMarch 22, 20141In my opinion universities (no need to capitalize) are the places where we get acquire knowledge. Here (Don't refer to universities as here, it sounds better to talk like a third person) There, we learn by listening, observing and interacting (Commas do not replace the word and, except when making a long list). Students get interacted with each other.
The reason why I prefer why think everyone should go for to university is that we get big platforms to share the knowledge. Sharing between students and sharing between students and professors increases knowledge. I think presentations and group discussion are effective means of knowledge transfer
I think (Sounds better in the beginning of the sentence). In universities we get knowledge of not only of our interested subjects that interest us but others too. If we decided to learn on our own, it is unlikely that we will go for the subjects other than our interests. Here we get introduced with to all types of subjects. Though Although someone is may not be interested in maths, he they will learn maths it- at least one which is required in a minimum for day to day life.
Another example is our queries get solved by qualified professors. It’s always better to clear get rid of your doubts than to remain in confusionconfused. Professors are there to help students in their studies.
Additionally, at universityies we are assessed on many different parameters. Like For example, in exams we are assessed on academic parameters and in projects we are assessed on interpersonal skills. From these assessments we come to know where we are good and where we are lacking.
Furthermore, many extra-curricular activities takes place. Universities just don’t developed us academically. There are many activities like poster competitions contests and quiz competitions. These extra-curricular activities assess us on creativity, initiation and leadership qualities. The one Those who is are good at these skills gets a chance to work on it them and the one who those who lacks inn it them, gets opportunity to improve it them.
Finally, universities are the places where we can get so many different subjects, where we can grow and we can prosper.0 votedAugust 9, 20132My Opinion About Love Of University
Everyone desires unfailing love in university, especially after you (spent a hardworking life) (not incorrect, but sounds strange) replace with: worked hard on in high school.
The love in university is pure, which doesn't include any benefit, such as money, authority andorothers.
Although you envy others pretty love, they also bear something that we don't know. We all know students don't have no much money, but it takes money and time, and you need to spend much a lot of money and time in maintaining your love. If you don't, your love will lose fresh passion. At last In the end, the love becomes a burden of to you, because you don't have much time and or money. You should be engaged in your study studies. the study (use pronouns instead of repeating) use: They plays an important role in your university life.
And (Try not to begin sentences with and) the students in university are not mature. Everyone has different characters, if you and him or she break up, she or he may do something that is reasonless, like suicide and or (When giving examples, use or, not and) jumping out of a high building. This is a big tragedy for your any family.
l had one girlfriend in my one semester, but now we had breaken out now we broke up. Now I (Always capitalize the pronoun I) understand that one is better than two, because you can do everything you want to do and the time is available you have more time to yourself. I use a Chinese sentence to express my state about love, “曾经喜欢一个人,现在喜欢一个人”。This sentence It means that I loved a girl in the past, but now I love to be single.
Finally, (This conclusion is a bit incoherent.) I hope I have a bright a future after graduating from university.
as well Also, I hope you can edit my article, your correcting is my big passion that what pushes me to go ahead.0 votedAugust 9, 20133Medicine
A few days ago I had an unpleasant story experience. My little niece got sick. At night, she felt ill and all members of our family members were very worried. We decided to go to the nearest hospital that would quickly get provide medical help. When we got there, the doctor said that he could not take us because in our country there are rules by which we should go to another hospital, where there were doctors on duty that day. We were desperate and asked the doctor to give a moment for have a look at the baby that to determine how serious the problem was. The doctor agreed and gave us some recommendations. But for a complete inspection diagnosis, we had to go to another hospital. After further examination and <em>(provision care doctors)?</em> the сhild began to feel better.
Ladies and gentlemen in parliament please make our lives better and not harder. Think well about astaking making/removing <em>(not sure what you meant)</em> some kind of law. Thanks to your rules we will never forget the experience of thethat night's experience.0 votedAugust 9, 20132My trip to San Diego
The Next week i'm going to San Diego to get see my boyfriend. He went to San Diego to get pilot license for helicopters.
I will stay in California only ten days, and I will want to visit Los Angeles and Disneyland.
I think that I will try to practice surfing. I love sports.
I'm very happy, and I hope this trip is amazing/amusing.0 votedApril 21, 20130Thai new year
From the 13th to the 15th of April, the Thai new year is celebrated. Our celebration are pay pays respect to the elderly and we throw water to at other people. This is famous here. I like it very much because this month is the most hottest. I can throw water to at anybody and put some powder on their faces. It's very fun. I have had a long holiday, so I went to Chang Island with my two nieces. It is located in the province of Trat province. There were many tourists when we went there. There were many beautiful beaches and waterfalls.
0 votedApril 21, 20131(37) I truly want to improve my writing skills. I'd love to have you help!
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I went to the library with my brother today. We took our customary seat and opened the book to study. We found ourselves drifting away from the studying just after a short period of time. We continued to try to study though, only to find ourselves repeatedly distracted. It was driving us nuts. We judged decided it wouldn't work for a while and stopped forcing ourselves to study. We got out of the study room for a break and looked around the library for the first time. It turned out there were various things we had not known about: DVD rooms, a movie theater and computer rooms etc. However, we had to choose only one option for a short break. Our choice was one of the DVD rooms. There was a great collection of various movies and dramas. We leafed through the movie list and we found a suitable movie to study. That was a movie titled Home Alone.
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I went to the library with my brother today. We grabbed our usual seats and opened our books to study. It took only a little time before we our minds started drifting away from studying. We got distracted as much as no matter how much we pushed ourselves to study and we were getting annoyed with ourselves. Realizing it wasn't working, we decided to take a break. We left our seats and walked around the library for the first time. We found various things we never knew hadn't known about: DVD rooms, the movie theater and computer rooms, etc. However, we could try explore only one for a short break. Our choice was the DVD room(s). It provided various DVD titles of movies and dramas. We went through a list of titles and found a movie suitable for our study. That was the movie titled Home Alone.
Please help me!
Thanks!0 votedApril 21, 20132
