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Hi, Plz help me with correcting my essay on Why to go to university? In my opinion Universities are the places where we get knowledge. Here we learn by listening, observing, interacting. Students get interacted with each other. The reason I prefer why everyone should go for University is that we get big platform to share the knowledge. Sharing between students, sharing between student and professor increases knowledge. Presentations, group discussion are effective means of knowledge transfer I think, In universities we get knowledge of not only our interested subjects but others too. If we decided to learn on our own, its unlikely that we will go for the subjects other than our interest. Here we get introduced with all subjects. Though someone is not interested in maths, he will learn maths- at least one which is required in day to day life Another example is our queries get solved by qualified professors. It’s always better to clear your doubts than to remain in confusion. Professors are there to help students in their studies Additionally, at university we are assessed on many different parameters; Like in exams we are assessed on academic parameters; in projects we are assessed on interpersonal skill. From these assessments we come to know, where we are good and where we are lacking. Furthermore, many extra-curricular activities takes place, universities just don’t developed us academically. There are many activities like poster competition, quiz competition. These extra-curricular activities assess us on creativity, Initiation, leadership qualities. The one who is good at these skills, gets chance to work on it, the one who lacks inn it, gets opportunity to improve it. Finally, universities are the places where we can get so many different subjects, where we can grow, we can prosper

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In my opinion universities (no need to capitalize) are the places where we get acquire knowledge. Here (Don't refer to universities as here, it sounds better to talk like a third person) There, we learn by listening, observing and interacting (Commas do not replace the word and, except when making a long list). Students get interacted with each other.

The reason why I prefer why think everyone should go for to university is that we get big platforms to share the knowledge. Sharing between students and sharing between students and professors increases knowledge. I think presentations and group discussion are effective means of knowledge transfer
I think (Sounds better in the beginning of the sentence). In universities we get knowledge of not only of our interested subjects that interest us but others too. If we decided to learn on our own, it is unlikely that we will go for the subjects other than our interests. Here we get introduced with to all types of subjects. Though Although someone is may not be interested in maths, he they will learn maths it- at least one which is required in a minimum for day to day life.
Another example is our queries get solved by qualified professors. It’s always better to clear get rid of your doubts than to remain in confusionconfused. Professors are there to help students in their studies.
Additionally, at universityies we are assessed on many different parameters. Like For example, in exams we are assessed on academic parameters and in projects we are assessed on interpersonal skills. From these assessments we come to know where we are good and where we are lacking.
Furthermore, many extra-curricular activities takes place. Universities just don’t developed us academically. There are many activities like poster competitions contests and quiz competitions. These extra-curricular activities assess us on creativity, initiation and leadership qualities. The one Those who is are good at these skills gets a chance to work on it them and the one who those who lacks inn it them, gets opportunity to improve it them.
Finally, universities are the places where we can get so many different subjects, where we can grow and we can prosper.

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