My Opinion About Love Of University

Everyone desires unfailing love in university, especially after you (spent a hardworking life) (not incorrect, but sounds strange) replace with: worked hard on in high school.
The love in university is pure, which doesn't include any benefit, such as money, authority andorothers.
Although you envy others pretty love, they also bear something that we don't know. We all know students don't have no much money, but it takes money and time, and you need to spend much a lot of money and time in maintaining your love. If you don't, your love will lose fresh passion. At last In the end, the love becomes a burden of to you, because you don't have much time and or money. You should be engaged in your study studies. the study (use pronouns instead of repeating) use: They plays an important role in your university life.
And (Try not to begin sentences with and) the students in university are not mature. Everyone has different characters, if you and him or she break up, she or he may do something that is reasonless, like suicide and or (When giving examples, use or, not and) jumping out of a high building. This is a big tragedy for your any family.
l had one girlfriend in my one semester, but now we had breaken out now we broke up. Now I (Always capitalize the pronoun I) understand that one is better than two, because you can do everything you want to do and the time is available you have more time to yourself. I use a Chinese sentence to express my state about love, “曾经喜欢一个人，现在喜欢一个人”。This sentence It means that I loved a girl in the past, but now I love to be single.
Finally, (This conclusion is a bit incoherent.) I hope I have a bright a future after graduating from university.

as well Also, I hope you can edit my article, your correcting is my big passion that what pushes me to go ahead.