need help from nativies will you please correct the below text Dear Sir or Madam: With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at CLA Institute of language. As mentioned in my CV, I majored in Computer Science and I have been working as a website and database designer for 3 years. Form the last 4 years I have also been studying English as a second and international language for communication and business. I got a job in one of the leading international inspection companies (BIS) in Iran in 2011 since now. Due to make more progress in my career, I have started to learn international trade and business correspondence. The position in BIS got me the chance to communicate with foreign trade companies in Iran and all over the world and help me to improve my negotiation skills and raise my self- confidence to take risks and ability to work independently and a team member as well. Regarding to gain experiences though these years of working, I wish to carry on my own business and establish an institute of language in Iran. Therefore I have decided to apply for this course due to achieved below advantage: First, I consider the program as a great opportunity to learn more French in less time. I think nothing is better than to learn language with the native speakers. Because we can practice with the local people what we study at school, so it is very useful to improve our listening and speaking skills. Secondly, It is also very important for me to get in touch with the French culture, way of thinking, history, customs and lifestyles. Last but not the least, adapting to a new environment is a real challenge for every foreign student. I am sure it would greatly enrich my communicative knowledge and my confidence in running my own business after I return. I have chosen to apply to CLA institute. Looking at their program assures me of the quality of their educational systems. In addition, my sister’s family resides in this city, and I will have the benefit of taking help in any emergency case. Furthermore, I am confident that my experience in France would be extremely exciting, fun, and valuable for both my studies and overall general development. Thank you for considering my request. Yours faithfully,

A FORMAL LETTER NEDD TO BE CORRECT Hi there, I want to ask natives to correct this notebook Thanks ....................... Dear Sir or Madam: With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at CLA Institute of language. As mentioned in my CV, I majored in Computer Science and I have been working as a website and database designer for 3 years. Form the last 4 years I have also been studying English as a second and international language for communication and business. I got a job in one of the leading international inspection companies (xxxx) in xxxx in 2011 since now. Due to make more progress in my career, I have started to learn international trade and business correspondence. The position in BIS got me the chance to communicate with foreign trade companies in Iran and all over the world and help me to improve my negotiation skills and raise my self- confidence to take risks and ability to work independently and a team member as well. Regarding to gain experiences though these years of working, I wish to carry on my own business and establish an institute of language in Iran. Therefore I have decided to apply for this course due to achieved below advantage: First, I consider the program as a great opportunity to learn more French in less time. I think nothing is better than to learn language with the native speakers. Because we can practice with the local people what we study at school, so it is very useful to improve our listening and speaking skills. Secondly, It is also very important for me to get in touch with the French culture, way of thinking, history, customs and lifestyles. Last but not the least, adapting to a new environment is a real challenge for every foreign student. I am sure it would greatly enrich my communicative knowledge and my confidence in running my own business after I return. I have chosen to apply to CLA institute. Looking at their program assures me of the quality of their educational systems. In addition, my sister’s family resides in this city, and I will have the benefit of taking help in any emergency case. Furthermore, I am confident that my experience in France would be extremely exciting, fun, and valuable for both my studies and overall general development. Thank you for considering my request. Yours faithfully,

Learning French in France, pros and cons Hi guys, I am applying for a course of learning French in France , I have get an interview from embassy ,but now i am in doubt whether it is a worst or not . I know the fees will be much more than learning at my home and also it should take more than one year if i want to learn at home. My sister lives in the city where i want to go and i can get help and they offer me a job to decrease the fees. the other thing is, I am come from a big city ,crowded ,the city i want to go is small and too calm. I already have a good job the job they will offer me a simple and it is scared me to leave all behind myself. I am in my 30th , I think if i was younger ,it would be more easier. I wounder if someone here have had the same problem. I would be nice to share your idea or experience with me to make a better decision.

please have a look at my notebook!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dear all, i have wrote a official motivation letter for embassy of France , i am asking you to help me and correct the mistakes and modify the letter(add any sentences if it help to decorate the letter ) in earliest time. so many thanks in advance. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear Sir or Madam: With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the CLA institute of language. As it is mentioned in my CV, I have majored in computer and I had been working as websites and databases designer in my filed for 3 years. Since last 5 years I have been studying English as a second and international language for communication and business as well. However i have started in my youth age my great interests and efforts have made significant progress which leads me to learn international trade to get more in touch with English language I could get a job in one of the leading international inspection companies (BIS) in IRAN since 2011. Presently I have a firm decision to learn French as well. Therefore I have decided to apply for this course because I would like to establish an institute of language in Iran as major reason. Second, I consider the program as a great opportunity to learn French in more less time and I am sure it would strongly enrich my language skill communication and help me in my prospective career. Very important for me is also getting in touch with France culture and educational system to experience more through future year that never equivalent at my home institute. I have chosen to apply for CLA institute; because having looked at their program makes me sure of their quality of education systems. In addition my sister’s family resides in this city. I would very much like to spend one year at the institute of CLA. This would give me a chance to deepen my commendation knowledge in the inspiring, creative, and cosmopolite environment of one the French spoken country. Furthermore I could increase my confidence in running my own business after I return. Moreover, I am confident that my experience in France would be extremely exciting, fun, and valuable for both my studies and overall general development. Thank you for considering my request. Yours faithfully, *******