need help from nativies will you please correct the below text Dear Sir or Madam: With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at CLA Institute of language. As mentioned in my CV, I majored in Computer Science and I have been working as a website and database designer for 3 years. Form the last 4 years I have also been studying English as a second and international language for communication and business. I got a job in one of the leading international inspection companies (BIS) in Iran in 2011 since now. Due to make more progress in my career, I have started to learn international trade and business correspondence. The position in BIS got me the chance to communicate with foreign trade companies in Iran and all over the world and help me to improve my negotiation skills and raise my self- confidence to take risks and ability to work independently and a team member as well. Regarding to gain experiences though these years of working, I wish to carry on my own business and establish an institute of language in Iran. Therefore I have decided to apply for this course due to achieved below advantage: First, I consider the program as a great opportunity to learn more French in less time. I think nothing is better than to learn language with the native speakers. Because we can practice with the local people what we study at school, so it is very useful to improve our listening and speaking skills. Secondly, It is also very important for me to get in touch with the French culture, way of thinking, history, customs and lifestyles. Last but not the least, adapting to a new environment is a real challenge for every foreign student. I am sure it would greatly enrich my communicative knowledge and my confidence in running my own business after I return. I have chosen to apply to CLA institute. Looking at their program assures me of the quality of their educational systems. In addition, my sister’s family resides in this city, and I will have the benefit of taking help in any emergency case. Furthermore, I am confident that my experience in France would be extremely exciting, fun, and valuable for both my studies and overall general development. Thank you for considering my request. Yours faithfully,