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dear all,
i have wrote a official motivation letter for embassy of France , i am asking you to help me and correct the mistakes and modify the letter(add any sentences if it help to decorate the letter ) in earliest time.
so many thanks in advance.

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Dear Sir or Madam:
With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the CLA Institute of language.
As it is mentioned in my CV, I have majored in Computer Science and I have been working as a websites and databases designer in my filed for 3 years.
For the last 5 years I have also been studying English as a second and international language for communication and business as well. However I have started learning in my youth, age and my great interests and efforts have made significant progress which leads me to learn international trade to get more in touch with the English language
I got a job in one of the leading international inspection companies (BIS) in IRAN in 2011.
Presently I have made a firm decision to learn French as well. Therefore
I have decided to apply for this course because I would like to establish an institute of language in Iran as major reason.
Second, I consider the program as a great opportunity to learn more French in less time, and I am sure it would greatly enrich my language skills communication and help me in my prospective career.
It is also very important for me to getting in touch with the French culture and educational system to gain experience unavailable at my home institute.


I have chosen to apply to CLA institute. Looking at their program assures me of the quality of their educational systems. In addition, my sister’s family resides in this city.

I would very much like to spend one year at the institute of CLA. This would give me a chance to deepen my commendation (communicative?) knowledge in the inspiring, creative, and cosmopolitan environment of a the French-speaking country. Furthermore, I could increase my confidence in running my own business after I return. Moreover, I am confident that my experience in France would be extremely exciting, fun, and valuable for both my studies and overall general development.
Thank you for considering my request.
Yours faithfully,
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