熊小兔吃冰淇淋

我觉得我该告诉你们一点点关于我自己的事。
我是熊小兔。我住在石屎混凝土森林（也就是大城市） 
在美国。我从星期一到星期五上班做蛋糕在冰淇淋商定在冰激凌商店上班，工作是做蛋糕，而且星期日我只帮顾客。既然因为现在是冬天、我们没有很多买卖。我不太喜欢星期日、我觉得那些星期日很无聊。因为工作日顾客喜欢订购蛋糕、所以工作日很开心很有乐趣。我很喜欢做蛋糕！也许有一天我会upload（上传）一些我做的蛋糕照片。无乱如何、我的老板很奇怪。因为他只爱钱、他当冰淇淋的所有者了、所以他会拿小儿童的钱，所以他当冰激凌店老板只是为了挣小孩子的钱。都些这里的冰淇淋太贵啦在这里！但是我的监督是好的人个好人。如果儿童没有足够钱为付冰淇淋、她还是会把它给儿童。她也会煮印度的食物、非常好吃！这个冰淇淋也好吃。如果监督还一直给我食物，而也我也还一直吃蛋糕和冰淇淋、我能当会变成胖子的！
那么、我想我说话关于我的工作比我谈到更多的是我的工作而不是我，啊哈〜

如果你不懂我写了，这是英文的版本：
I think I should tell you a bit about myself.
I am Bunny Bear. I live in a concrete jungle. I work at an ice cream shop making cakes from Monday to Friday,but on Sundays I only help customers. Since it's winter now, we don't have a lot of business. I don't really like Sundays, I think they're boring. On weekdays, customers like to place cake orders, so weekdays are pretty fun. I love making cakes! Maybe one day I will upload some photos of the cakes I make. Anyway, my boss is weird. He became an owner of an ice cream shop to steal money from little children because he only loves money. All of the ice cream here is too expensive! But my supervisor is nice. If a kid doesn't have enough money foe ice cream, she will still give it to them. She even cooks Indian food for us. It's soooo good! This ice cream is also good, if my supervisor keeps giving me food, and i keep eating cake and ice cream, I may become fat!
Well, I guess I talked more about my job than about myself, aha...

大家好！我叫爱丽丝。我是英国人，住在英国东部的一个城市。我是一个接待员和兼秘书，在中国公司工作！可是工作的时候，没有机会跟工人练习说中文，我们都是太忙了！ 

我很喜欢画画，电脑游戏。我最爱的电脑游戏是神奇宝贝系列，也喜欢SKYRIM（上古卷轴V：天际？）我常常开发游戏模组。
我写中文写得不太好，对不起！请帮助我改善！^_^

 PS：哈哈，你中文很好嘛。我也玩Skyrim。但是神奇宝贝系列不应该是Plam Game么？用中文说就是掌机游戏