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熊小兔吃冰淇淋 我觉得我该告诉你们一点点关于我自己。 我是熊小兔。我住在石屎森林 在美国。我从星期一到星期五上班做蛋糕在冰淇淋商定,而且期日我只帮顾客。既然现在是冬天、我们没有很多买卖。我不太喜欢星期日、我觉得那些很无聊。工作日顾客喜欢订购蛋糕、所以工作日很开心。我很喜欢做蛋糕!也许一天我upload一些我做的蛋糕照片。无乱如何、我的老板很奇怪。因为他只爱钱、他当冰淇淋的所有者了、所以他会拿小儿童的钱。都些冰淇淋太贵啦在这里!但是我的监督是好的人。如果儿童没有足够钱为冰淇淋、她还给儿童。她也煮印度的食物、非常好吃!这个冰淇淋也好吃。如果监督还给食物也我还吃蛋糕和冰淇淋、我能当胖子! 那么、我想我说话关于我的工作比我,啊哈〜 如果你不懂我写了,这是英文的版本: I think I should tell you a bit about myself. I am Bunny Bear. I live in a concrete jungle. I work at an ice cream shop making cakes from Monday to Friday,but on Sundays I only help customers. Since it's winter now, we don't have a lot of business. I don't really like Sundays, I think they're boring. On weekdays, customers like to place cake orders, so weekdays are pretty fun. I love making cakes! Maybe one day I will upload some photos of the cakes I make. Anyway, my boss is weird. He became an owner of an ice cream shop to steal money from little children because he only loves money. All of the ice cream here is too expensive! But my supervisor is nice. If a kid doesn't have enough money foe ice cream, she will still give it to them. She even cooks Indian food for us. It's soooo good! This ice cream is also good, if my supervisor keeps giving me food, and i keep eating cake and ice cream, I may become fat! Well, I guess I talked more about my job than about myself, aha...

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very cut girl,hehe
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熊小兔吃冰淇淋

我觉得我该告诉你们一点点关于我自己(的故事)。
我是熊小兔。我住在石屎森林 (大都市)
在美国。我从星期一到星期五(在冰淇淋商店)上班做蛋糕在冰淇淋商定,而且(但是星)期日我只帮顾客。既然(因为)现在是冬天、我们没有很多买卖。我不太喜欢星期日、我觉得那些(星期日)很无聊。工作日顾客喜欢订购蛋糕、所以工作日很开心。我很喜欢做蛋糕!也许有一天我upload(会上传)一些我做的蛋糕(的)照片。无乱如何、可是我(发现我)的老板很奇怪。因为他只爱钱、他(把自己)当冰淇淋(店)的所有者了、所以(甚至)他会拿小儿童(小朋友)的钱。这里的都些冰淇淋太贵啦在这里!但是我的监督(领导)是好的人。如果儿童没有足够钱为(买)冰淇淋、她还(免费送)给儿童。她也(会)煮印度(特色)的食物、非常好吃!这个冰淇淋也好吃。如果监督还给食物也我还吃蛋糕和冰淇淋、我能当胖子! 如果领导继续给我吃的,并且我也继续吃蛋糕和冰激凌的话,我会变成胖子!

那么、我想我说话关于我的工作比我,啊哈〜
我想我介绍了很多关于我的工作的事情,胜过了介绍我自己。
如果你不懂我写的,这是英文的版本:
I think I should tell you a bit about myself.
I am Bunny Bear. I live in a concrete jungle. I work at an ice cream shop making cakes from Monday to Friday,but on Sundays I only help customers. Since it's winter now, we don't have a lot of business. I don't really like Sundays, I think they're boring. On weekdays, customers like to place cake orders, so weekdays are pretty fun. I love making cakes! Maybe one day I will upload some photos of the cakes I make. Anyway, my boss is weird. He became an owner of an ice cream shop to steal money from little children because he only loves money. All of the ice cream here is too expensive! But my supervisor is nice. If a kid doesn't have enough money foe ice cream, she will still give it to them. She even cooks Indian food for us. It's soooo good! This ice cream is also good, if my supervisor keeps giving me food, and i keep eating cake and ice cream, I may become fat!
Well, I guess I talked more about my job than about myself, aha...

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好像在說童話故事...
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I love ice cream and cake so much ,i like your job ^ ^
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熊小兔吃冰淇淋

我觉得我该告诉你们一点点关于我自己的事。
我是熊小兔。我住在石屎混凝土森林(也就是大城市) 
在美国。我从星期一到星期五上班做蛋糕在冰淇淋商定在冰激凌商店上班,工作是做蛋糕,而且星期日我只帮顾客。既然因为现在是冬天、我们没有很多买卖。我不太喜欢星期日、我觉得那些星期日很无聊。因为工作日顾客喜欢订购蛋糕、所以工作日很开心很有乐趣。我很喜欢做蛋糕!也许有一天我会upload(上传)一些我做的蛋糕照片。无乱如何、我的老板很奇怪。因为他只爱钱、他当冰淇淋的所有者了、所以他会拿小儿童的钱,所以他当冰激凌店老板只是为了挣小孩子的钱。都些这里的冰淇淋太贵啦在这里!但是我的监督是好的人个好人。如果儿童没有足够钱为付冰淇淋、她还是会把它给儿童。她也会煮印度的食物、非常好吃!这个冰淇淋也好吃。如果监督还一直给我食物,而也我也还一直吃蛋糕和冰淇淋、我能当会变成胖子的!
那么、我想我说话关于我的工作比我谈到更多的是我的工作而不是我,啊哈〜

如果你不懂我写了,这是英文的版本:
I think I should tell you a bit about myself.
I am Bunny Bear. I live in a concrete jungle. I work at an ice cream shop making cakes from Monday to Friday,but on Sundays I only help customers. Since it's winter now, we don't have a lot of business. I don't really like Sundays, I think they're boring. On weekdays, customers like to place cake orders, so weekdays are pretty fun. I love making cakes! Maybe one day I will upload some photos of the cakes I make. Anyway, my boss is weird. He became an owner of an ice cream shop to steal money from little children because he only loves money. All of the ice cream here is too expensive! But my supervisor is nice. If a kid doesn't have enough money foe ice cream, she will still give it to them. She even cooks Indian food for us. It's soooo good! This ice cream is also good, if my supervisor keeps giving me food, and i keep eating cake and ice cream, I may become fat!
Well, I guess I talked more about my job than about myself, aha...

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