First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to study abroad.
My native language is Russian and I grew up in Russia.

*Capitalize proper nouns

Good look with your studies !

What do I want to do after I will graduate my studies?

Tough question. First of all, I feel that I need a break, to take an vacation. I really want to travel the world and to build a street magic show. I have a soft spot for street theatre.
Also I'm thinking about doing my master's abroad, maybe in Japan. I have never been there before, but I feel connected to their state of mind. I want to absorb the Japanese way of life. I love to cook ( and of course to eat ) Japanese food and as they are just have brilliant in designs.
But in the end, I guess that I will work in at an interactive design company (there is where all the money is). I hope to find myself in the art branding area. I'm also thinking about creating a lecture about "creative thinking"; it will be a combination of design and magic, my two biggest loves.

* Your English seems really good, there are only a few problems with punctuation. Use a . when you want to start a new sentence.

That aside, I think that building a street magic show is a really cool idea. I have never seen a street magic show, but I love watching performances that occur out on the streets.

I also love the fact that you would be planning to study abroad in Japan. I absolutely love Japan and I totally understand what you mean by feeling connected to their state of mind. I also feel that way sometimes, and of course, the food is also a plus.

Good luck with your future plans !

Find my mistakes please ^0^

My sister needed some things so she asked my brother to take her to some places. it's It was my chance as I needed too some things as well, so I went along with them and I bought three things : a notebook, a book for learning the English language language and cotton to clean my make-up.
I bought all of this for only 24 SR.

*Don't forget to put verbs into past tense (i.e. need -> needed), but otherwise, really good English usage.

My Future Plan

After graduation, I hope I could can go to a foreign-capital enterprise. As far as I know am concerned, there exists various are many advantages in to that kind those kinds of firms. The most important is it make that they give you in a higher platform and they can open your minds. Meanwhile, It Also, they will pay more attention to your ability abilities rather than your background. Finally, I believe that students now are more willing to do disgraceful work, and foreign-capital enterprise can do you a favor. But, in the present society, especially in China, the new graduates are facing a big pressure to be employed. There exists countless numbers of competition. But, I firmly believe, just as the Chinese saying goes: if you are a piece of gold, you will shine sooner or later. So I could can definitely have a bright career in the future, as long as I now start to lay a solid foundation for the knowledge and skills needed in that field.

* I liked seeing that you followed my critique from the previous entry with putting a space after the .

* I think this is a really strong composition. Your English is very good.

I definitely agree that with the current economic crisis, getting a job is very difficult. But that proverb is really good, especially to me, because it is something I firmly believe in - though not the exact same words.

My strengths and weaknesses

I think the my greatest strength of myself is that I am a very persistent person and my life is very regular normal. For example, I went to play table-tennis with my friend every Wednesday afternoon and Saturday afternoon. and I spend one hour learning English in the morning at about 7 am. before I go to the lab. I have stuck to this schedule since I became a graduate student. Of course somethimes there are some exceptions. For example, sometimes when I go home, I have to communicate with my parents and am left with little time left to study. and I also listen to English tapes before I going to sleep, so consequently, it is a little difficult for me to sleep without listening to English.

And I am very healthy, both physically and metal mentally, I hardly go to the hopital. Maybe this is attributed to my regular life.

To the As for my weakness, I think my greatest weakness is that I am not a very imaginable imaginative person, I have few with a little of innovation innovative and aesthetics skills.At Being in my twenties, I didn't don't like to make up myself and to be honest, I don't have the ability to make up, it's a little difficult for me.

* You can not start a sentence with and

* Always capitalize the first word of a new sentence

* Proper nouns (i.e. days of the weeks, languages) are capitalized

* I don't really get what you mean by "I didn't like to make up myself" so I couldn't really correct that part

Overall, it's a really good composition. Your English is really good and the subject matter is interesting. Being persistent is definitely a very good skill to have.