My Future Plan

After graduation, I hope I could can go to a foreign-capital enterprise. As far as I know am concerned, there exists various are many advantages in to that kind those kinds of firms. The most important is it make that they give you in a higher platform and they can open your minds. Meanwhile, It Also, they will pay more attention to your ability abilities rather than your background. Finally, I believe that students now are more willing to do disgraceful work, and foreign-capital enterprise can do you a favor. But, in the present society, especially in China, the new graduates are facing a big pressure to be employed. There exists countless numbers of competition. But, I firmly believe, just as the Chinese saying goes: if you are a piece of gold, you will shine sooner or later. So I could can definitely have a bright career in the future, as long as I now start to lay a solid foundation for the knowledge and skills needed in that field.

* I liked seeing that you followed my critique from the previous entry with putting a space after the .

* I think this is a really strong composition. Your English is very good.

I definitely agree that with the current economic crisis, getting a job is very difficult. But that proverb is really good, especially to me, because it is something I firmly believe in - though not the exact same words.