find my mistakes pleas ^0^ My sister needs some things so she asks my brother to take her to some places it's was my chance , I need too some things , so I went with them and I bougt three thing : 1.

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find my mistakes pleas ^0^ My sister needs some things so she asks my brother to take her to some places it's was my chance , I need too some things , so I went with them and I bougt three thing : 1. notebook 2. book for learn English language 3. cotton to clean Make up . I biught all this only 24 SR .

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Find my mistakes please ^0^

My sister needed some things so she asked my brother to take her to some places. it's It was my chance as I needed too some things as well, so I went along with them and I bought three things : a notebook, a book for learning the English language language and cotton to clean my make-up.
I bought all of this for only 24 SR.

*Don't forget to put verbs into past tense (i.e. need -> needed), but otherwise, really good English usage.

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