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廣東話/粵語 - A 茶餐廳 in New York 好耐冇見, 上星期日,我同朋友喺茶餐廳一齊食咗晏。茶餐廳喺New York嘅唐人街。我哋嗌咗兩杯凍奶茶,西多士,焗葡汁雞飯,同埋焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。凍奶茶好甘美(refreshing點講呀?)同埋好甜。朋友鍾意佢嘅焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。西多士好食,因爲少少脆皮同埋好甜(a little crispy and sweet點講呀?)。我都鍾意焗葡汁雞飯,因爲雞好鬆婄(tender點講呀?)同埋我鍾意葡汁嘅味道。我哋食晏以後,我哋都食飽,但係好心。 Boston嘅唐人街冇茶餐廳,但係New York嘅塘人街有一個茶餐廳。我希望Boston嘅唐人街有一個茶餐廳。美國嘅茶餐廳唔及得香港嘅茶餐廳好食,但係一個茶餐廳喺Boston好過冇。 係咁先,下次見,拜拜!

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好耐冇見,

上個禮拜日,我同D朋友喺茶餐廳一起食晏,呢間茶餐廳喺紐約嘅唐人街。我地飲咗兩杯凍奶茶,通埋品嚐咗西多士、焗葡汁雞飯,鐘有焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。


凍奶茶令人清爽提神,西多士好食,個皮有少少脆,兩樣都是好甜噶。朋友鍾意佢嘅焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉,我就鍾意焗葡汁雞飯,因爲雞肉好鬆軟,中有就是我鍾意葡汁嘅味道。我哋都食得好飽,好開心。

 

波士頓嘅唐人街冇茶餐廳,只有紐約噶唐人街先有一間茶餐廳。我好希望波士頓嘅唐人街可以有一間茶餐廳啊。美國嘅茶餐廳唔及得香港嘅茶餐廳好食,不過如果波士顿有一间茶餐厅就好啦,总好過冇。

 

係咁先啦,拜拜!

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廣東話/粵語 - A 茶餐廳 in New York

好耐冇見,

上星期日,我同朋友喺茶餐廳一齊食咗晏。呢間茶餐廳喺New York嘅唐人街。我哋嗌咗兩杯凍奶茶,西多士,焗葡汁雞飯,同埋焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。凍奶茶好醒神(refreshing點講呀?)同埋好甜。朋友鍾意佢嘅焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。西多士好食,因爲少少脆皮同埋好甜 or 好脆好甜(a little crispy and sweet點講呀?)。我都鍾意焗茄汁雞飯,因爲雞好鬆脆(tender點講呀?)同埋我鍾意茄汁嘅味道。我哋食晏以後,我哋都食得飽,但係好心。

Boston嘅唐人街冇茶餐廳,但係New York嘅塘人街有一個茶餐廳。我希望Boston嘅唐人街有一個茶餐廳。美國嘅茶餐廳唔及得香港嘅茶餐廳好食,但係一個茶餐廳喺Boston好過冇(or 如果喺Boston有茶餐廳會更好)。

係咁先,下次見,拜拜!

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廣東話/粵語 - A 茶餐廳 in New York

好耐冇見,

上星期日,我同朋友喺茶餐廳一齊食咗晏。茶餐廳喺New York嘅唐人街。我哋飲咗兩杯凍奶茶,食咗西多士,焗葡汁雞飯,同埋焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。凍奶茶好清新(refreshing點講呀?)同埋好甜。朋友鍾意佢嘅焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。西多士好食,因爲少少脆皮同埋好甜(a little crispy and sweet點講呀?)。我都鍾意焗葡汁雞飯,因爲雞好嫩(tender點講呀?)同埋我鍾意葡汁嘅味道。我哋食晏以後,我哋都食飽,但係好心。

Boston嘅唐人街冇茶餐廳,但係New York嘅塘人街有一個茶餐廳。我希望Boston嘅唐人街有一個茶餐廳。美國嘅茶餐廳唔及得香港嘅茶餐廳好食,但係一個茶餐廳喺Boston好過冇。

係咁先,下次見,拜拜!

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廣東話/粵語 - A 茶餐廳 in New York

好耐冇見,

上星期日,我同朋友喺茶餐廳一齊食咗晏。茶餐廳喺New York嘅唐人街。我哋嗌咗兩杯凍奶茶,西多士,焗葡汁雞飯,同埋焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。凍奶茶好甘美(醒神)(refreshing點講呀?)同埋好甜。朋友鍾意佢嘅焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。西多士好食,因爲少少脆皮(塊皮有小小脆)同埋好甜(a little crispy and sweet點講呀?)。我都鍾意焗葡汁雞飯,因爲雞好鬆婄(嫩)(tender點講呀?)同埋我鍾意葡汁嘅味道。我哋食晏以後(食完晏之後),我哋都食飽,但係好(開)心。

Boston嘅唐人街冇茶餐廳,但係New York嘅塘(唐)人街有一個(use“間”would be better :D)茶餐廳。我希望Boston嘅唐人街有一個茶餐廳。美國嘅茶餐廳唔及得香港嘅茶餐廳好食,但係(有)一個茶餐廳喺Boston好過冇。

係咁先,下次見,拜拜!

 

Your writing is very good!

:D

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廣東話/粵語 - A 茶餐廳 in New York

好耐冇見,

上星期日,我同朋友喺茶餐廳一齊食咗晏。茶餐廳喺New York嘅唐人街。我哋嗌咗兩杯凍奶茶,西多士,焗葡汁雞飯,同埋焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。凍奶茶好清爽/提神(refreshing點講呀?)同埋好甜。朋友鍾意佢嘅焗蕃茄汁豬扒意粉。西多士好食,因爲塊皮脆脆地同埋好甜(a little crispy and sweet點講呀?)。我都鍾意焗葡汁雞飯,因爲啲雞好嫩(tender點講呀?)同埋我鍾意葡汁嘅味道。我哋食完晏以後,我哋都食飽,但係好開心。

Boston嘅唐人街冇茶餐廳,但係New York嘅塘人街有一間茶餐廳。我希望Boston嘅唐人街都有一個茶餐廳。美國嘅茶餐廳唔及得香港嘅茶餐廳好食,但係多一間茶餐廳喺Boston總好過冇。

係咁先,下次見,拜拜!

 

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