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Book recommend: The three-body problem I'm going to talk about a book called The three-body problem by a celebrated Chinese writer. It has been famous for years in China. After its English translation was published in foreign countries, the book got huge numbers of fans. Chinese science fiction novels seldom got international awards, but this nevel surprisingly won the Hugo award in 2015. As for what the book is about, this book mainly talks about a secret military project trying to send signals into space to establish contact to aliens.And as they wished, the signal is captured by an alien civilization which then plan to invade the Earth. At the same time, human are divided into several groups fighting with each other. The plot, I'd say, is complicated but brilliant, amazing and gripping. Moreover, It's said that this novel will be transformed into a film which makes me excited. (Actually this is a script of an answer of IELTS speaking test. Please help me heard like a native speaker.)

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Book recommendation: The Three Body Problem

I'm going to talk write about a book called The Three Body Problem by the celebrated Chinese writer Liu Cixin. It has been famous for years in China. After its English translation was published in foreign countries, the book gained huge numbers of fans. Chinese science fiction novels seldom get / win / receive international awards, but this novel surprisingly won the Hugo Award in 2015. As for what the book is about, it mainly talks about  involves / concerns a secret military project trying to send signals into space to establish contact to with aliens. And as they hoped, the signal is captured by an alien civilization which then plans to invade the Earth. At the same time, humans are divided into several groups fighting with each other about the aliens' true intentions. The plot, I'd say, is complicated but brilliant, amazing and gripping. Moreover, it's said / I've heard that this novel will be transformed made into a film, which makes me excited.

(Actually, this is a the script of an answer of for a IELTS speaking test. Please help me heard sound like a native speaker.)


Your written English is quite good.  Everything is clear, and many of the edits are just to sound more like a native speaker.  

我同意你的评价，文笔一般，剧情很有趣。

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Book recommendation: The Three-Body Problem

I'm going to talk about a book called "The three-body problem" written by Liu Cixin, a celebrated Chinese writer. It has been famous for years in China. After its English translation was published worldwide, in foreign countries, the book got  it gained a  hugefollowingnumbers of fans. Chinese science fiction novels seldom win get international awards, but this nevel surprisingly it took  won the 2015 Hugo Award in 2015. As for what The synopsis the book is about, this book mainly talks about a secret military project trying to send signals into space to establish contact to with aliens.And as they wished, when the mission became successful, signal is captured by an the alien civilization which then planned to invade the Earth. At the same time, the human race is split into various factions,  are divided into several groups fighting with each other. To me, the plot, I'd say, is complicated complex but brilliant; amazing and gripping. Moreover, It's said that this novel will be transformed made/adapted into a film movie which and this makes me excited.

(Actually this is a script of an answer of IELTS speaking test. Please help me heard sound/write like a native speaker.)complex /= complicated

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Book Recommendation: The Three-Body Problem

I'm going to talk about a book titled The Three-Body Problem by Liu Cixin, a celebrated Chinese writer. It has been famous for years in China. However, after an English translation was finally published, the book earned huge numbers of additional fans worldwide. While Chinese science fiction novels seldom receive international acclaim or awards, surprisingly, this book won the 2015 Hugo Award for Best Novel. As for the plot, it mainly concerns a secret military project which sends signals into space in the hope of establishing contact with aliens. One of their signals is, in fact, captured by an alien civilization, which later then plans to invade the Earth. At the same time, humanity is divided into several groups who are all fighting with each other. In my opinion, the story is not only ingeniously complicated, but also brilliant, amazing, and gripping. Moreover, it has been said that this novel will be made into a film which makes me rather excited.*

(Actually this is a script of an answer of IELTS speaking test. Please help me to sound like a native speaker.)

Hi Haokai. Good job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that this helps you! J.

*Titles are italicized or underlined or put in quotation marks. Typically, the author’s name is given as well since there may be more than one book with that same title.

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Book recommend: The three-body problem

I'm going to talk about a book called The three-body problem by a celebrated Chinese writer. It has been famous for years in China. After its English translation was published in foreign countries, the book got huge numbers of fans. Chinese science fiction novels seldom got international awards, but this nevel novel surprisingly won the Hugo award in 2015. As for what the book is about, this book mainly talks about a secret military project trying to send signals into space to establish contact to with aliens.And as they wished, the signal is was captured by an alien civilization which then planed to invade the Earth. At the same time, humans are divided into several groups fighting with each other. The plot, I'd say, is complicated but brilliant, amazing and gripping. Moreover, It's said that this novel will be transformed adapted into a film which makes me excited.

(Actually this is a script of an answer of IELTS speaking test. Please help me heard sound like a native speaker.)
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What is the name of the book in Chinese? I am not sure this is the case, but potentially this refers to 三体问题， 物理学的问题 among other things. It sounds like an interesting book.

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