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Apologies, but due to the time difference if you are overseas, it will be very hard, if not impossible, for us to contact each other in real time (my day is your night...). Plus, this is just a hobby for me, as I lead a full life, so I don't have much time to chat or socialize online. On the weekends, I'm busy playing tennis, which I have played almost all my life. Sadly, I'm tone-deaf, and terrible at learning other languages, but perhaps, through my poor edits, I can help others learn English.
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    Dear Mike, Thank you for your email. I believe that I fully understand the situation, but my overriding question is why didn't you notice it until now? It has been three months since the development started, and we have been expecting to launch the new system in approx. a month’s time. According to the agreed-upon protocol, your company has had all the responsibility to investigate the environment necessary for revising the system. Given the present situation, I'm not that we can handle the changing of server settings at this late juncture/at this point. Please kindly detail of all the factors that have led to this unfortunate development. Most importantly, has there been any change to the specifications? Needless to say, I'm now not only disappointed, but also worried. Please do your best to submit the report by this weekend, or let me know when I can expect it to be delivered to me. Thank you.
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    March 18, 2021
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    Today my iPad is broken, so I cannot see the display on the screen properly. I will still try to type this post. Hi Molly. Good job! A few hours ago, as you were trying to type on your iPad back then, at that moment, you should write that it IS broken. The words "is," "see," and "am," (especially when used with "today") all show present tense. Similarly, the word "trying" shows present continuous tense when paired with "am." Thus, you meant as you were writing/trying to write your post. Using the word, "was," would change the rest of your sentence (Today my iPad was broken, so I could not see the screen properly. I was trying to type a post). The word “so” can be many parts of speech, but in this case, it is being used as a conjunction to connect two independent sentences. Therefore, you need to put a comma before it (and I know that I told you this before...!) Yes, you need to be more strict with yourself! (*-^)
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    February 24, 2021
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    Both sentences are grammatically sound, however, if I were to use Sentence No. 1, I would put an “a” before “further.” This emphasizes that the lines, which are already blurred, are even more so by whatever “this” is. In terms of their usage, as Chris noted earlier, a Google Ngram Viewer search shows it being approx. 2 to 1 for the latter, while a COCA search shows it being slightly more. Thus, I would say sentence No. 2 is the more natural as more native speaker (and writers) use it.
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    February 24, 2021
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    1. While I quickly synchronized my movements with his—going from left to right—in sniffing the shelf, my mind was also casually swimming through the pages of memory books in my head, as it slowly crawled its way from novel to novel there on my memory shelves.

    2. It was the first day of school, and the students were all dressed in their brand-new school uniforms that gave them the appearance of classic tin dolls.

    3. He was adrift in the sea of new people, desperately trying to look calm and composed, but to the observant, his eyes were moving anxiously around the room in the hope of finding a safe place to settle.

    <em>Hi, Y.S. Good job! I’m not sure the above are any improvement, but these are my edits of your sentences. I tried to retain the essence of your compositions, but whether I succeeded or not is for you decide. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.</em>


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    August 4, 2020
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    429 - One Step at a Time

    One step at a time, I'm completing all the tasks I have been procrastinating over for these past few months. It's been a very tough time, and the looming return and possible spread of the Coronavirus is not encouraging. In fact, for many of my goals, I've had to change my plans and put them off. The deadline for which I expect to have achieved most of them is at the end of this year, especially the ones dependent solely on me. Afterward, it will be time to relax, to think about the present, and to then make some difficult decisions. Those might be the most important ones of my life, so rushing into them would be a terrible mistake. As I exist right now, I simply have to face these problems one at a time, until eventually, I'll find myself free of them, as well as ready to make deliberate and well-thought-out choices for my future.

    <em>Hi, Tonel. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.</em>
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    August 4, 2020
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    August 4, 2020
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    Please Correct My Notebook Entry 040820

    1. Oh! Please make up your mind. Do you want to go to the party or not?
    2. Women are considered to be better at multitasking than men.
    3. That is completely irrelevant: it has nothing whatsoever to do with it.
    4. Don't be so impatient, the bus will be along in a minute.
    5. Almost two million people took part in the anti-war protest in Karachi in 2017.
    6. She is completely incapable of doing what she has been told.
    7. If you disagree with our decision, you can submit your objections in writing.
    8. They felt rather uneasy with the situation they found themselves in.
    9. The Concord plane was the first super-sonic passenger jet. It flew faster than the speed of sound.
    10. I am sorry, but the fish has been overcooked. Can you take it back to the kitchen and bring me another?
    11. This year will mark the bi-centenary of the company. Two hundred years is a real milestone.
    12. I've just given up smoking. It's been hard, but I find knitting helps to take my mind off it.
    13. There has been a significant brain drain due to the crisis, with skilled people moving from Karachi to the US.
    14. Can I pick your brain for a moment? I'm not clear about what to do and I'd really like your opinion.
    15. I will call to bounce anything off you if I need it.

    <em>Hi, Asim. Good job! Others may disagree, but the above is how I would edit your sentences. If you have any questions, I’ll be glad to try to answer them. I hope this helps you, Jonathan.</em>

    <em>No. 1–Oh is an interjection, so it needs a form of punctuation after it. I used an exclamation point, but you could also use a comma to join it with the following text.</em>

    <em>No. 10–“Can you take it back...” is a question, so it needs a question mark.</em>

    <em>No. 13–An effect is due to a cause. His tardiness was due to heavy traffic = correct. Due to heavy traffic, he was tardy = incorrect. Generally speaking, do not begin a sentence with “due to,” and you will probably be safe. (*-^)</em>



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    August 3, 2020
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    Practicing My English

    I am writing this message because I promised myself that in my free time, I would write, listen, and speak English as much as I possibly can. I hope that this has been written correctly. 

    <em>Hi, Arthur. Good job! That's a good strategy for learning your target language, so keep following it. I would suggest reading in English also, as it will help to improve your vocabulary, as well as expose you to proper sentence structure and punctuation.</em>
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    <em>As to the writing, the promise to yourself happened in the past, thus, the verb should reflect that. The words “the maximum“ and “as much as I can“ are redundant, thus, I removed the former. The nominative singular pronoun “I“ is always capitalized when referring to yourself. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.</em>

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    August 3, 2020
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    One apparent disadvantage brought by reclamation is that a vast area of wetland will be damaged.

    <em>Hi Shonan. Without further context it is somewhat hard to determine exactly how to modify your original sentence, but the above sentence retains the essence of it with as little change as possible. Alternatively, you could also use “that vast areas of wetland will be damaged.” I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.</em>

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    August 2, 2020
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    Hi Gabriel.
    Well, it depends on what you are trying to state, as all your proposed sentences are grammatically correct, but each conveys a slightly different meaning, particularly as to tense. Regardless, given your statement that you have not, in fact, actually posted the advertisement yet, getting clients will be a future act. Thus, I feel it better to use “will not be” (won’t be) or, “shall not be,” as both relate to the future tense, instead of using “weren’t,” which relates to the past. Of course, use “are not” (aren’t) for the present tense. 

    By using “We weren’t expecting...,” you create the inference that what you were not expecting has already happened, As examples: 
    We weren’t expecting it to rain (but it did!), so that is why we did not take umbrellas and got soaked.
    We weren’t expecting to arrive so late (but our flight was delayed), so we apologize for making you wait.
    We weren't expecting to have any clients (but one actually walked in) before we posted the advertisement on the web.

    That’s my “two cents” worth as a native speaker, but others are free to disagree. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.
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    August 2, 2020
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