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در حال حاضر خودم هستم for now I am me
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    !سلام

    .من فارسی یاد می گیرم
    .من انگلیسی بلدم و من اهل انگلیس هستم

     

    some important points:

    Be carefull in using pronouns in persian because in persian verbs you have to use pronoun then using it again in sentence in general is not correct and it calls حشو which means extra

    but it is used in some cases for emphasize on yourself which is not polite in all the situation specialy in case of talking about yourself so it is better to eliminate all من pronouns because from the م which called ضمیر چسبان or close-fitting pronoun

     

    but about sentences timing if you said فارسی یاد می گیرم you are talking about the moment you are doing this but if you want to say about somthing which is more continous and start in past and may continue in future say  دارم فارسی یاد میگیرم or  در حال یادگیری زبان فارسی هستم the difference is in their application دارم فارسی یاد می گیرم is informal and used just in speech also its time is shorter but درحال یادگیری زبان فارسی هستم is more formal and also used in speech and the time of doing is more longer.

    but the most beautiful sentence to tell this is: مشغول یادگیری زبان فارسی هستم

    this sentence is formal and also common use in speech it is also mention to jobs which need time like language learning. or another example is about education if someone ask you رشته تحصیلی شما چیست؟ what is your education field? it is better to answer مشغول تحصیل در رشته مهندسی هستم I am educating in engineering field.

     

    Ballboy explanation about two other sentences is complete.

     

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    about me hi dear all It's Saeid. I am student in electrical engineering and want to improve my English writing and speaking. I am Iranian and love Persian literature, because I am a Poet for more than 8 years. I write my poems in Persian and can help every body who like to improve his/her Persian. I want to share one of my short poems here: باز هم لا به لای لحظه هایم می نویسم آنقدر که کاغذ تمام شود قلم تمام شود دنیا تمام شود بیاستم خدارا نگاه کنم فقط نگاه کنم نگاه کنم تا من هم تمام شود its hard to translate your poems in another language when you are not master on that but I try to do my best: Again, I am writing among the moments till the paper peter out the pen peter out the world peter out I stand look at God just looking looking till also myself peter out.
    August 22, 2012
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    Я учу фарси, так как мне интересен Иран

     

    Daria may be your font is not correct and the characters are seem like hebrew not persian.

     

    here is a sample sentence in persian:

    ایران سرزمین پارس

    which means: Iran the land of Pars

     

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    August 22, 2012
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