!سلام

.من فارسی یاد می گیرم
.من انگلیسی بلدم و من اهل انگلیس هستم

your Farsi is great!

seperately lookin at these two sentences, i can find no grammatical error. however considerin' them together as a part of a conversation, it sounds a bit odd.

here is the implication i get from that:

من فارسی یاد می گیرم is not an equivalent sentence to 'I am learning farsi now' in english.and it implys your decision to learn Farsi ' I shall learn Farsi'.

 therefore, to mean that you are studying Farsi language these days you'd better say 'من دارم فارسی یاد می گیرم' or

من در حال یادگیری زبان فارسی هستم.

And of the second sentence, ' I speak english and i am from England' it may sound just right to you as anative speaker of english language but if i was you i would leave out the second من

من انگلیسی بلدم و من اهل انگلیس هستم

من انگلیسی بلدم چونکه اهل انگلیسم

من اهل انگلیسم و به همین خاطر انگلیسی را بلدم.

good luck

Hi,

I learning english so maybe I have some mistakes in my english sentences.

In face all of your sentenses are correct but maybe it`s better to say them in the other style.

I explain it as follow:

!سلام

.من فارسی یاد می گیرم

من در حال یاد گیری زبان فارسی هستم.

Your say it like "I'm learning Persian". It`s ok and has no grammer mistake but its better to say it like as I said. "در حال" defines that you are doing something continuously and you didn'f finished it yet. (Simple Continuous Tense)

.من انگلیسی بلدم و من اهل انگلیس هستم

.من انگلیسی بلدم و من اهل انگلیس هستم

It`s completely correct too but in English you should use I (subject) with all following verbs for example "I Know Persian and I'm from England" but in persian you can ignore I (Subject) in some connected sentences with same subject.

Visualization in English (I know English and I'm from England)