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about me hi dear all It's Saeid. I am student in electrical engineering and want to improve my English writing and speaking. I am Iranian and love Persian literature, because I am a Poet for more than 8 years. I write my poems in Persian and can help every body who like to improve his/her Persian. I want to share one of my short poems here: باز هم لا به لای لحظه هایم می نویسم آنقدر که کاغذ تمام شود قلم تمام شود دنیا تمام شود بیاستم خدارا نگاه کنم فقط نگاه کنم نگاه کنم تا من هم تمام شود its hard to translate your poems in another language when you are not master on that but I try to do my best: Again, I am writing among the moments till the paper peter out the pen peter out the world peter out I stand look at God just looking looking till also myself peter out.

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About me

Hi dear all
It's Saeid. I am student in Electrical Engineering and want to improve my English writing and speaking.
I am Iranian and love Persian literature, because I have been am a poet for more than 8 eight years. I write my poems in Persian and can help every body who likes to improve his/her Persian.

I want to share one of my short poems here:

باز هم لا به لای لحظه هایم می نویسم
آنقدر که
کاغذ تمام شود
قلم تمام شود
دنیا تمام شود
بیاستم
خدارا نگاه کنم
فقط نگاه کنم
نگاه کنم
تا من هم تمام شود

it's hard to translate your poems into another language when you are not master on of  that but I try to do my best:

Again, I am writing among the moments
till
the paper peter out
the pen peter out
the world peter out
I stand
look at God
just looking
looking
till also myself peter out.

 

I really enjoyed reading your poem. Well done. I wish you all the best

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About me

Hi dear all
It's Saeid. I am student in the faculty of electrical engineering and want to improve my English writing and speaking.
I am an Iranian and love Persian literature, because I am a poet for more than 8 years. I write my poems in Persian and can help every body who like to improve his/her Persian.

I want to share one of my short poems here:

باز هم لا به لای لحظه هایم می نویسم
آنقدر که
کاغذ تمام شود
قلم تمام شود
دنیا تمام شود
بیاستم
خدارا نگاه کنم
فقط نگاه کنم
نگاه کنم
تا من هم تمام شود

its hard to translate your poems in another language when you are not master on that but I try to do my best:

Again, I am writing among the moments
till
the paper peter out
the pen peter out
the world peter out
I stand
look at God
just looking
looking
till also myself peter out.

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thanks dear
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nice poem

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