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I am a student ,and I want to look for a language exchange partner who is good at English,because I want to improve my English skill.I can help someone who want to improve theit ability of Chaniese,no matter what speaking ,or writting skill.
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    今天很晴朗

    今天很晴朗所以我跟我爸爸打高尔夫球。我喜欢打高尔夫球 但是这很让我很沮丧的是。我在广州找不到高尔夫球场。你们喜欢打吗? 你们打在哪?

    “高尔夫球”is the object which you cannot omit. Because if you lock of object,you will make reader being confused.

    "但是这很沮丧" mean is"but it is frustrated that", however we always say that"I cannot find a golf course in Guangzhou which make me frustrated"

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    August 19, 2012
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    Does school should provide more money to libraries? I agree with that the universities should give the same amount or money to their student sports as they give to their libraries. There are some points to support my views. On one hand, sports are benefit to improve the qualitiesof body, only if students have a heath physical, can they do well in the study. There has a girl in our class,,whose name is TianJie,before she joins playing sport usually,she always suffer diseases so that she could not present in class on time and she can not play a good role in the study .It's getting a high score until she insists to run. Thus universities should spend the same money in sport to offer supplement room and equipment used to students do exercises. On the other hand, one person's characteristics can be influenced by sports and sports always making sporter activate and tolerate. I was a student who could not go through the difficulties med in study. When I encounter some difficulties, I would rather give up than try to find methods to deal with its. It'd until someday I was told that I should do some sports which I like and I hold to do that I realize I gradually become positive and not worry about difficulties. Therefore,universities spending money on sport is worth. The last not the least, students can culture their sense of team, which is so important in resent competition,by playing sports. Playing sport commonly need cooperation ,especially in the sports match. Without good cooperation,no team can beat rural. Such as basketball,if eight athletes do not work together and just thinking about themselves,they can not win the match. Thus, students who usually take part in sport games have more the spirit of cooperation. Although libraries are necessary in universities,because of students reading and studying there,sports are also essential in universities. The views above mentioned, I think universities should cost equal the amount on sports with on libraries.
    August 17, 2012
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    我想- 在北京的第三天

    我的旅馆有很多自行车。
    吃了早饭就问服务员:我可以不可以用自行车?
    他回答:你可以用自行车。
    我骑自行车去参观天安门。
    我在天安门右边看过一个姑娘。她的自行车坏了。
    - 你好!
    - 我很好!
    - 我会修理你的自行车,因为我在俄罗斯常常修理摩托车。自行车比摩托车修理 更容易更容易修理。
    - 好!你是不是莫斯科人?
    - 对,你是北京人,是吗?
    - 不,我生在北边现在在北京学习。
    - 你学什么?
    - 我学俄语(哈哈)
    - 我觉得你叫燕子,是吗?
    -对!
    我们很高兴。修理了完她的自行车就一起骑自行车去参观北京胡同。
    到了晚上到我们去DongzhimenneiDajie喝绿茶还吃了中国菜。
    ——
    我从别墅回莫斯科告诉我跟燕子怎么参观長城=)))

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    August 17, 2012
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    今天早上起床

    今天早上我的狗里面我的卧室走了走进了我的卧室。它在跳上了我的床上跳了。因为我很累, 它让我很生气。但是,我今天没有工作, 所以, 我再次继续睡觉。 因为它很可爱,所以我让它在我旁边睡觉。它很高兴。

    “走进来”means"come in to"it is a action,in englsh,"come in to "is wrong,but in chinese "to"is needed.里面" is represented a place,it always put in the end of sentence,for example,"狗走进了我的卧室里面"

    “因为我很累,它让我很生气” is not logic."它让我很生气'‘is because it enter my bedroom when I sleep,which is not related to "我很累“You can say"可是我很累,它的行为让我很生气”

    “但是”means “however", it is the reason why yotu can go to sleep again.Thus,you can replace it with"因为“

    ”再次“is too formal ."继续"also means ”again“。you also can use it to express "you keep on doing something".Such as,"我继续看书'’   ”我继续看电视”

    This is the first time I comment in English.Maybe there are  inproprate something.Hope it is useful to you

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    August 17, 2012
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    我想- 在北京的第2天

    昨天我找到旅馆了。
    早上10点我起床,吃了早饭就参观紫禁城。
    -我可以在哪买票?票价是多少钱?
    -你能在旅馆买票.
    - 谢谢。我怎么去紫禁城?
    - 你要坐地铁去哪些站,紫禁城在地铁站对面,你能看到。
    -好,再见!
    参观紫禁城后我去看京剧。(我在旅馆买到票)。
    京剧很有意思!
    然后我在饭馆吃晚饭。 我吃了很多种中国菜,很好吃!
    晚上要在公园去(可能喝一点啤酒)。
    -请问,厕所在哪?
    - 我不知道!
    要是我不喝啤酒就不用找厕所。
    晚上一定要照相,然后回旅馆睡觉。

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    August 17, 2012
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    August 16, 2012
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a univercity student who want to learning English,because I want to go to study abroad after graduate.So I want to improve my English skill before I go abroad.What is more, I want to make friends who come from America .My native language is Chinese ,and I grew up in China.I enjoy listening to music and seeing movis.I am enthusiasitc and positive.If you want to improve your Chinese,I will try my best to help you and I hope we will make progress.
    August 16, 2012
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