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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a univercity student who want to learning English,because I want to go to study abroad after graduate.So I want to improve my English skill before I go abroad.What is more, I want to make friends who come from America .My native language is Chinese ,and I grew up in China.I enjoy listening to music and seeing movis.I am enthusiasitc and positive.If you want to improve your Chinese,I will try my best to help you and I hope we will make progress.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a university student who wants to learn Englishbecause I want to go to study abroad after I graduate. So I want to improve my English skills before I go abroad. What is more, I want to make friends who come from America. My native language is Chineseand I grew up in China. I enjoy listening to music and seeing movies. I am enthusiasitc and positive. If you want to improve your Chinese, I will try my best to help you and I hope we will make progress.

 

Put the punctuation right after the word, then put a space after it.

I corrected a couple spelling errors and missing or incorrect parts of speech.

The word "so," is a conjunction (like "and," or "but"). Conjunctions are used to join two clauses within a sentence, so we rarely begin a sentence with a conjunction.

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